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Last edited by Lay Doubt.; March 21st, 2005 at 11:59 PM
Been a real one.
Last edited by Token; March 24th, 2005 at 09:03 PM
go dig up another old verse to use you fag
Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.
nah, Jacents worth a fresh verse
Haha
true
12's good Quotey-poo
i swear...
u worked hard to elevate, now this guy merks
so here's a tip
concentrate on getting an outside life first
yet we anticipate his stuff, so whens his next hit?
so don't be surprised
if he got razah & jaycee outta retirement to write them shits
i got secrets, but this guys dirty
& tell me
how is a worthless shit able to write worthy?
call it monotone, but i got hollow bones
& that steel on your neck isn't a medal, just call it chrome
heard quote joinedmy shit, man ya'll jocking dick
cause i'm the future, now i'm considering droppin it
i'ma bigger draw than dude, ya'll dont like hate
& you can have the title
cause it basically sums you up....a lightweight
s'all love
check it ..
J aint livin up stacked, so quit the tough act
you aint even live in the projects, its more like the rough draft
broke bitch, you aint noticed cuz ur fallin B
& it aint cuz your low key - its ya keys low quality
this d/rin geeks got glasses & i'ma knock him out cold
& i'd tell him about contacts, but he knows enough about those
J aspires to be me, its kind of eery but true
i put a dot on my name & now he gotta period too
talk bout my life? why u think i aint a mod w/ an S
u should talk, i mean hell - even your dads Oliver Thenet
i'm serious dude, w/ personals u know i come hot yo
cuz we all know you're more in deon than fuckin Squanto
yet we anticipate his stuff, so whens his next hit?
so don't be surprised
if he got razah & jaycee outta retirement to write them shits
call it monotone, but i got hollow bones
& that steel on your neck isn't a medal, just call it chrome
heard quote joinedmy shit, man ya'll jocking dick
cause i'm the future, now i'm considering droppin it
v.
J aint livin up stacked, so quit the tough act
you aint even live in the projects, its more like the rough draft
broke bitch, you aint noticed cuz ur fallin B
& it aint cuz your low key - its ya keys low quality
this d/rin geeks got glasses & i'ma knock him out cold
& i'd tell him about contacts, but he knows enough about those
talk bout my life? why u think i aint a mod w/ an S
u should talk, i mean hell - even your dads Oliver Thenet
i'm serious dude, w/ personals u know i come hot yo
cuz we all know you're more in deon than fuckin Squanto
v/quote.
came better.. jacent came nice, but quote just came a lil bit more doper, worded some shit better too.. forreal, felt this match. good shit boys
Jace..
yet we anticipate his stuff, so whens his next hit?
so don't be surprised
if he got razah & jaycee outta retirement to write them shits
heard quote joinedmy shit, man ya'll jocking dick
cause i'm the future, now i'm considering droppin it
--thats all i was really feeling from ya verse
Quote..
J aint livin up stacked, so quit the tough act
you aint even live in the projects, its more like the rough draft
broke bitch, you aint noticed cuz ur fallin B
& it aint cuz your low key - its ya keys low quality
this d/rin geeks got glasses & i'ma knock him out cold
& i'd tell him about contacts, but he knows enough about those
--that rough draft punch was ill, liked 3 of ya punches to jace's 2 so...
v) Quote
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WhatThatLookLike..?!
any lords in herre wanna battle and lose
yo wise ways,
imma hit ya once and you go'n be daised for days,
in the hospital eatin potato lays,
or at your family reunion hangin wit the gays,
yea im callin you out to battle,
but ya might not want to cuz imma leave your head a rattle,
Pretty good battle guys...
Jacent's Overall Verse: 22/60Originally Posted by Jacent.
Comments:
You should know you can do way the fuck better than this...I should e-bitchslap you for writing this honestly...drop the 3 line structure...it's effective in a few lines, but not all of them....you know how to battle...you should know what you done wrong here...
Quote's Overall Verse: 33/60Originally Posted by Quote.
Comments:
You stayed consistent and fresh pretty well the entire time of your verse...I know personally you can come better, but maybe your saving up for something bigger than an LW title...iono...good verse...good read...
Vote - Quote.
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V/ Quote
Sorry jace, but Quote got ya here
J aint livin up stacked, so quit the tough act
you aint even live in the projects, its more like the rough draft
broke bitch, you aint noticed cuz ur fallin B
& it aint cuz your low key - its ya keys low quality
this d/rin geeks got glasses & i'ma knock him out cold
& i'd tell him about contacts, but he knows enough about those
sorry guys
i don't really have time for this anymore..
i'm out
pz
btw, good verse quote
love you