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    Thumbs up Gettin Dis Money...(gotta peep dis)

    dis my first open mic on RB...decided to show yall my shit from RV...peep it all and leave some real feedback please...check

    [intro]
    ayo i cant stay alive foreva
    so as long as i can spit me and my flows gone shine togetha
    betta now than neva, 4play before pleasure
    walkin before i run dis, who u know doin it betta (no one)
    ...*echoes*...

    [verse 1]
    i was raised to be feared so i went ahead and dressed up
    gathered my niggaz in all black then we would act up
    at tha strip-mall is where i knocked my first store off
    had tha eye of my .38 lookin like death to tha white broad
    i told her to give me tha cash, she unloaded tha stash
    then afterwords i said "thank-you" by tyin up her ass
    threw her in da closet wit my lil nigga and he rocked it
    came back to tha safe-house and helped count our profit
    now look at us as we still be robbin dem corner stores
    gettin tha pussy of course, hittin skins in a red porshe
    niggaz neva expected us to bug out, pull tha gun out
    really let a nigga know what Dem PlayBoiz is all about
    but its okay, cuz we gone be dat deal regardless
    causin more strees than periods, but neva slowin progress
    and yes we still rap a lot, no doubt to ya homie
    but first we gotta get our muthafuckin money

    [hook]
    (its all about tha green) no doubt to ya homie
    we gotta get all dis muthafuckin money
    -repeat 4x-

    [bridge]
    lord please forgive all tha sins i have made
    but u know niggaz been broke down now a days
    -repeat 2x-

    [verse 2]
    i went to tha safe-spot wit my nigga flat roc
    he poured tha liquor and we both had a straight shot
    i asked "whats tha occasion", he said "dedication"
    loyalty means everythang so it was a special arragement
    afterwords i went to check on my whores
    not like they be trickin for me but they owe out tha bras
    tha money i recieved was chump change indeed
    but it was seed to my great cherry tree for tha spring
    seems like when u do good, bad shit happens more
    my big cuz got shot in tha jaw durin a drive-by storm
    cant see drugz no more cuz he started beef wit us
    still cant get ova how he two-timed us
    but karma comes back round full circle like da ring
    its fucked up how much a lil money can mean
    and yall niggaz know how i roll, dont u homie?
    well if u dont, now u know dat im bout gettin money

    [hook]
    (its all about tha green) no doubt to ya homie
    we gotta get all dis muthafuckin money
    -repeat 4x-

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    almost

    iwas really into the first verse but lost it a little in the middle of the second one nice song good show of versitility .....basically it was descent

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    thanx alot...yeah, i ran outta shit to ryhme wit in da second verse...got writtaz block...uppin

    -G

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