just a quick little sicc spit (peep dis)

[Damani-DaGrinch]

-----just a quick little spit off the top-----

for me pain is life and life is pain// its all equivilant// its been fuckin wierd since that dirty hoe gave me syphilous//
the pussey was all brown and pubes were fallin out// but when i asked her she told me it was cuz she was deciduous// i was only about 14 at the time// and it looked pretty tasty after that fith of bacardi lime// so i ate it fast but that was the worst decision of mah fuckin life// cuz my tounge fell out now i can only speak with my knife// i try to carve words into peeps chest but they always seem to die// last night i went to the docter for a swollen prosdate// he said you only 16 that doesnt happen till you of age// well anywayz, i pulled out my blade so that we could communicate// but doc grabbed a scalpel slashed my eye and stuck it in my leg// when you put it all together im in pretty bad shape// peg leg, no tounge, only one functional eye// and still got a swollen prostate with a dick thats shrivelled and ready to die// if i said oh well, at least i got my health that would be an obvious lie//

[LACK OF LOGIC]

you could be the spawn of me and blaster lol tight work twin

[Damani-DaGrinch]

thanx cuz.....uppin

[Damani-DaGrinch]

do i really have too up this shit again?

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[NinoScar]

tight shit... its pretty fucked up to have one eye, a peg leg and no toungue, lol

[Damani-DaGrinch]

why do you think i dont do audio?
nah j/k
uppin

[GanGsta J]

damn kid spittin fire-but it was sick brah.
nasty imagry.an wway tight drop cuzz keep at it
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[Acidic]

yo another hot piece from u man keep it up

[Supreme]

yo i was lovin this
write some more carzy shit like this fo me nigga

good look on hittin up my "emotions explodin"
ill be lookin fa more of this

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[Xxplicit_Dezire]

haha dam this was sick..got me imagining all tha crazy shit u spoke..but yo tyte flow..and keep doin ya thang..pz

[MC4Eyez]

This was alright for the most part. Pretty wild, but not too much that made me go...DAMN! Solid though. I didn't mean it as a diss. There was one quote that made my jaw drop...

pubes were fallin out// but when i asked her she told me it was cuz she was deciduous
That was goddam funny. Anyone who says otherwise is wrong.

Peace

[S-MaN aka Yung S]

aYo, that's some crazy topic you got there dunn, but none tha less it was off tha hook

thanx for peepin my shit

uppin this shit for you

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[white ghost]

sup dawg,

i'm gonna have to be the only one here who's not feelin your rhyme homie. you had a few lines that i liked, but you need to work on a few things. it probably wouldve sounded a lot better if you found a consistent flow to work with. one

[JKnowledge]

Interestin thoughts goin thru your skull. I thought it was a good flow, but not spectacular. I'm just tryin to get a perspective on everybody's flow in here. Been a while since I posted anywhere.

[Dat_Nigga_D_aKa_$o$a]

das was cool u know for sum crazy shyt like eminem type shyt but u know it was cool