Sylentz vs Twixn... [TNL vs IJL]

**ThE ReAlEsT OnE** · March 24th, 2005, 03:06 PM

Sylentz
world is urs

The moon, the sun, the sea and the whole entire land
Soon enough this will be yours, youll stand grand
The animals in this kigdom, Youll set the status of the world
Decide who stays and who goes, Decided on who gets hurled
This will be your world, You can take complete responsibility
Your choice to provide utilties, Chance to rid the disabilities
Mental or not, This will be your oppurtunity to run the place
From earth to space, You will be in control of this unpeacful race
You will be known as god, You will the one with the powers
Decide on the fate, You can decide to stop things such as the towers
The poverty on the streets, The drought of a midsomer heat
Youll decide it all, The world wars, youll decide who to defeat
Prostitutes and the laws, Youll be giving the nod on the whores
And you will soon be the best know man, because the world will be yours

nice stuff man,provided nice imagery of ur topic,u stayed on topic an i could see this happenin..nice vocab an flow,nice verse
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Twixn

Fatal Act

Tied bound and gagged, ill slip into her skin
I dragged her up the stairs the demon told me within
A world of sin suddenly unfolded to my blind eyes
a part of me dies, molded as I watch the evil arise
unfortunate ties that brought about these lies here
searing pain her punishment, I can smell her fear
as I brought the knife near, the old me screamed no
yet the stab to her stomach fell, destroyed her souls glow
I laid her head down my corrupt mind feeling no remorse
My anger dissolved, finally I had destroyed the source
Knocked our dream of a happy family off course to hell
Demonic therapy from years of rage, the new spell
And For our last moments together, I bathed in the fact…
that both our worlds belonged to me and my fatal act

Very good verse 4 the topic,couls c the imagery,it had nice flow and vocab..overall good verse..

very close battle but i have to go with sylentz...i was feelin his verse more..liked the topic and the imagery...both good job tho

V/Sylentz

vote on the battle in my sig..pz

**Bottom Line** · March 24th, 2005, 05:45 PM

Sylentz - U had very good imagery..flow wuz on point..and u didn't stray from the topic..This wuz a hot drop from u..I liked how u incorporated ur vocab.u didn't force it or sacrifice content for flow..this wuz A-1..

Twixn - U dropped dope as usual..everything wuz on point..not really much more I can say..I'm pretty much speechless..

vote = Twixn

vote on my battle wit Toxicant - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=179233

**Violent.** · March 26th, 2005, 06:06 PM

Word

Up2

**Violent.** · March 27th, 2005, 07:01 AM

up3

leave links

**Glory** · April 1st, 2005, 01:14 AM

lets be honest.

sylentz...way too repetitive, too much repetition=boredom. my attention to your verse was luggish. i wasn't feelin it. the topic was boring, seriously. the story from the start made me want to stop reading, way too choppy.

twixn- better approach, even if it was a different topic. real nice touch on the story, it was simple, but i actually didn't mind reading it. easy to understand. it was the common suspense theme, with the devils and what not, but it was enough for me.

vote-T

check my battles in return.

**Incineratedrose** · April 1st, 2005, 02:17 AM

Originally Posted by Infinite Skillz

Sylentz - U had very good imagery..flow wuz on point..and u didn't stray from the topic..This wuz a hot drop from u..I liked how u incorporated ur vocab.u didn't force it or sacrifice content for flow..this wuz A-1..

Twixn - U dropped dope as usual..everything wuz on point..not really much more I can say..I'm pretty much speechless..

vote = Twixn

vote on my battle wit Toxicant - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=179233

have his vote DQed, he is repping an MT sig.