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Thread: Freestyle ( Punch Lines)

  1. #1

    Freestyle ( Punch Lines)

    You want to battle
    I instill the fear
    It not nelly it's ur beathe thats hot in here
    Beat a asian
    homeboy u better get ur gun
    I eat fish
    but ur ass smell like one
    A hot asian thats blazin to the game u better beg
    Damn u got a pussy
    "It stank!"
    Close ur legs.
    nuthin to me u a mc i cant see
    Im the king of the world
    Im like god i rule heaven
    u cant close ur legs cause they open 24-7
    u a bitch
    man u ho!
    Hold it down for Cali
    Killia rep Frisco
    Harder then hard
    im a pimp let me give u some tips.
    Dont fuck wit me cuz my game is bigger then jay z's damn lips
    hot boy dropin dimes
    with ryhmes
    that make the bitchs log off of windows 99
    so dont battle me if u dont have a pucnh line
    cuz i can win in my chair
    seat back
    and Recline
    it's over.....battle me

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    newbie drop. i didnt like it. your structure really stunk. shouldnt have 2 words then another line. work on extending ur lines and throwing a punch with every bar. also, dont try glorifying urself in a battle, the object is to diss the other guy.
    keep working at it tho
    pz

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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