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Thread: HW Title: Feeble (5-0) vs. Lay Doubt. (4-0)

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    HW Title: Feeble (5-0) vs. Lay Doubt. (4-0)

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    Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
    Vote on 3 battles and leave links. I'm checking.
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    sure.
    Been a real one.

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    LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
    I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
    jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
    but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten
    you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
    you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
    im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
    cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
    shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
    I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
    this'll be ya worst yet, rep tainted, remember its broken
    when to get here, you dq'ed an LW member from voting
    grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
    far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
    You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
    why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
    I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
    since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
    aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
    treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
    Ya Crew sucks, yall pretend ya better & hope its assuring
    I aint talking bout Jesus, when I spread the Word all over this forum
    rofl, slant rhyme? ^

    you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
    how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
    your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
    so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
    i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
    went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
    n if it pleases.. Deja's worthless and ain't livin for reasons
    you don't care? then watch me leave you indifferent pieces
    y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
    cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
    kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
    after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
    no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
    that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
    you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
    cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself
    his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
    go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
    i smack nerds, quit acting tough cuz Feeble, you're most bitch
    so how you gonna pic a fight when you're too pussy to post it?
    Last edited by Lay Doubt.; March 10th, 2005 at 09:20 PM

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    If you read this battle, please vote. Me and Geno aren't going to be asking for votes, but if you read it please vote on it.

    Peace

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    -feebs

    LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
    I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
    im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
    cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
    shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
    I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
    grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
    far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
    You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
    why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
    I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
    since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
    aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
    treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..

    : pretty good verse from you, wasn't feeling a couple of ya punches but for the most part they were solid.. the loan, bias, and out of proportion were ones i liked best from you.

    -lay

    your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
    so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
    y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
    cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
    kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
    after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
    you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
    cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself

    :those were the ony punches i was feeling from you, you came pretty inconsistant for my taste, but the assure punch was your best one in my mind.

    count this or not but you guys wanted votes and so i gave you one

    v- Feeble Minded

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    you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
    you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
    im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
    cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
    aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
    treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..

    vs.

    i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
    went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin <---omg
    y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
    cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
    kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
    after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
    his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
    go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password

    lol@feeble complaining about not being creative with personals and then using them in like half his shit -_-.

    v - Lay Dizzout =/

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    My complaint is that most peoples personals = the most boring shit I have ever seen. Lol. Its cool though. even though you had no need to make that comment. 1-1

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    LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
    I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
    you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
    you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
    shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
    I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
    You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
    why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
    aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
    treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..

    vs

    i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
    went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
    y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
    cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
    kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
    after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
    his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
    go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password

    Feeble won this by a nut hair, it could go either way tho dependin on preference but I think Feebs took this with a little more consistency and more quotables, I think both came dope tho, And Geno really made this tough for feebs, but i think he fell a bit short, good shit 1
    Artificial Intelligence

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    Quote Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
    My complaint is that most peoples personals = the most boring shit I have ever seen. Lol. Its cool though. even though you had no need to make that comment. 1-1
    I only said something cuz I felt you were just trying to fit in instead of doing what you know you want to do. But you know I still luh you so why care?

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    wow Lay Doubt is the dopest thing to hit this league in ages.
    I wish I was as dope as him.
    I think I'll start crying now just to begin my Genocide emulation.
    Last edited by Kaput Mundi; March 12th, 2005 at 05:29 PM
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    harsh breakdown kap, considering your verses aren't all that great.

    just basically saying i didn't have one good line in my verse? lol, right.

    i know the "password" line didn't suck and the "Dodge" line isn't played.. k thx.

    2-1.
    Been a real one.

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    LWs claiming they're better, ya'll are a crew of imposters
    I'd tell them cut the crap.. but i laugh seeing you on the roster
    ^eh, so u cant tell them to cut the crap cuz yur laughing? weak
    jace lost to me, shadows & spit no showed, u brag its achieving
    but really your rosters just a list of all the faggots I've beaten
    ^ jace also beat you too, i dunno bout the rest, me and u are 1-1 meh
    you dickrode, & elevation? thats a concept this newb believes in
    you have promise.. but we all hope it has to do with leaving
    ^lol, i likes
    im truly even.. sick of ya bitch music, u get bruised quick
    cant even make a name for yourself.. you had spit choose it
    ^lol, another good 1
    shoppings a feminine trait, your the kinda bitch i devour
    I'd leave him alone, but he'd spend that shit in an hour
    ^ok wordplay i guess
    this'll be ya worst yet, rep tainted, remember its broken
    when to get here, you dq'ed an LW member from voting
    ^ok
    grew a huge ego, but against center the duckings worse..
    far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse
    ^nah, this 1 was more of a stretch, cuz the word changed completely
    You bitch, quit bowing to spit.. we dont need it for reference
    why you Lay Doubt, when its clear the knees is your preference
    ^eh
    I may be prejudiced, but it isn't like your rapping is fine,
    since i wasnt even bias. . until i started passing his lines
    ^nope
    aint near my level.. caught up in the doubt & distortion
    treat ya head like a mistake & blow it out of proportion..
    ^ok

    decent



    you ain't cut out for this Feeble, i'll dismantle you boss
    how you gonna handle LLL? crybaby can't even handle a loss
    ^ok i guess
    your bantering stops, we all know what your verse brings
    so fuck convincing the voters... you losing is assure thing
    ^nope, didnt like
    i hurt kings, played fuck.. obvious new material's needed
    went and flipped that hair line so much it started recedin
    ^ok i guess
    n if it pleases.. Deja's worthless and ain't livin for reasons
    you don't care? then watch me leave you indifferent pieces
    ^no
    y'all have the least wit, they ran... looks like you won't win son
    cuz they got outta Dodge.. while you can't even afford to get in one
    ^i like
    kid musta dimmed some, lousy spits but still the loudest bitch
    after i strip him of his title i betchu the homo gets aroused n shit
    ^heh, it was ok..the aroused part was funny
    no flow and thinks he has a thousand hits, nah, $pit's right
    that bar wouldn't be a slant rhyme if you posted with this type
    ^nope
    you're mostly the bitch, guy.. and i'm just here givin' some help
    cuz his verse brings arraign of wack lines that could imprison himself
    ^dope
    his shit isn't well, Deja ain't run shit.. cuz i'll sever and bash herbs
    go ahead and protect your forum.. but you'll still never password
    ^nah
    i smack nerds, quit acting tough cuz Feeble, you're most bitch
    so how you gonna pic a fight when you're too pussy to post it?
    ^eh

    v/feeble, just more consistant
    iont kno, but im gettin tired of all these lw and deja lines really, they boring as fuck

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    hey bitch your the one who dont know me

    hey im fatassG and i came to to disturb the peace,
    i hipnotyzed your mom and made her striptease,
    just by reading your verses i can tell you's a bitch,
    you rhyme like a dumb ass white boy named mitch,
    dont talk like you know a lot of shit,
    come to my hood and your ass gonna get hit,
    just respond to me and try to dis,
    i know yo weak ass cant come back hard like when i fucked your bitch ass sis,
    ive rapped the best and done the impossible,
    everyones tried me and lost cuz im just that unstoppable,

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