thanks alot....
thanks alot....
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aight nice use of multis and great emotion I felt that all the way through for sure .. did u write this to a beat for audio or is it just some OM shit ? Either way nice man Your topical skills are definatley coming along short and sweet a nice drop hit me for a collabo sometime pz.
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na just wrote it man...thanks
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It's dopeness, but you know that, everyone else has told you as much already. I really think you can still improve though, I mean, everyone can. The figuritive language was limited, I wouldn't say basic necessarily, but limited. The voice was very strong though. It flowed good, but you're an audio head, that's a given. This was great though, well worthy of HOF..
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that shit was tight homie, real deep, elevate, -one-
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that was deep as hell......i like to draw.....its a talent that i got from my dad.....i never really looked at it that way though......while reading it I could tell that you put a lot of thought into it.....but yea.....that was real deep.....i enjoyed it....and I dont even read OM's.....keep it up fam
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thanks man....
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this was very goood.. emotion was very strong in this, multis were good, vocab was good, structure and flow were also pretty good..theres really nothin bad to say about this... seemed a lil short, but i still enjoyed it. the last 2 lines were good, i liked em. nice drop!
wow nigga that shit was deep man... u got sum crazy ass skills... do i c a new pac in da houssse??? yea i think i do and it's u muthafucka... awesome shit right there man u lay it down nice and simple... awesome
lmfao at new 2pac...word to that ha.
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im kweli fool
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This was sick.
The topic was good.. the flow was on target..
The transition from lines made for a nice read..
Imagery and emotion were dope as well..
Just an overall tight drop..
Keep it up yo.
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