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    I need to be an Artist.



    I need to be an Artist

    I lust for the depression, the aggression art holds
    The obsession to make an impression as a possession unfolds
    The moulds of a true artist, I let my mind go wondering
    Sometimes opens my eyes to success, or I go blind from blundering
    Thundering pains in my head, from powders ive snorted
    I don’t do it for the image, but to get that image distorted
    Unsupported and unstable, living in my studio of mood swings
    A bottle, some chalk and paint what ever my mood brings
    Ive screwed rings of companions up,
    Friends have been lost forever
    I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
    Then they come back together,
    My head is the weather, but rains what it often releases
    Art was my confidence boost, delivered messages in my pieces
    It increases my amount of depression, I have an obsession for pain
    My minds on a simple plain but far from simple and plain
    Cocaine assists this chalk to the paper, makes inspiration flow
    Without it my mind is blank like this paper, allows the foundation to grow
    And although this hobby eats away at me, and cuts of my health
    I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self
    Himself and I are attached simply matched with a passion
    Of displaying our naked images in our own kind of fashion
    Satisfaction is a bonus, my body now floats as a vapor
    Rushing threw life none existent from pieces of paper.


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    Last edited by nolonger; March 5th, 2005 at 11:01 AM

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    thats sum deep shit

    the illest shit u ever right my man......................
    vocab is real nice

    love the puns really wrked had a little flow going there i read it to A BEAT

    keep it up
    The Survivor season 2.

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    word thanks bro.

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    Ive screwed rings of companions up,
    Friends have been lost forever
    I’m hoping that like my art, I rip them
    Then they come back together,

    ^ i was really feelin that part right there, this wasn't a bad piece AT all, shit was really good, the flow was on point & the content was very deep man, mos def om hall of fame

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    this was really a nice spit, the level to reach

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    This was great.

    Your tone was incredible. The rhythm was fast paced and easy to follow. Structure was pretty good. Vocabulary wasn't annoyingly complex. I reallly can't find much wrong with this. I wish it was a bit longer, you were on such a roll that you could've squeezed a couple more lines in there and I think it would've made the piece better.You lacked a bit of emotion, but then came strong with your tone and syntax. Not much imagery, but I don't think this is an imagery piece. Definitely OM hall of fame material. This would've made a dope spoken word piece. Great job, and don't forget to drop in our battle.

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    hotness

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    yo that was rill deep...great flow and great structure...i was feelin it, keep it up, yu got madd skillz

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    Who the fuck is this again? I can't stand all the name changing. And word to the mexican, tone and voice were amazing.
    can I kick it?

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    Ill shit, K. I think it's safe to say that you're now one of the top topical cats here. Good job. I may nominate this for OM of the month.

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    I need to be an artist because art is an art in its self


    ^ K, May 5th 2005.


    That's worth a quote.


    Depth was nice, flow was better, story & imagery was dope.

    Like Stairs.

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    shit was tight..loved the wordplay and flow
    Artistic Visions
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    word to all these replies thanks alot boys...word thanks w1cked holla for a collab

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    cute

    i loved that weather and rain line, gettin emotional there

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