crazy

[Boy Nova]

[B]Yo yo yo... hit it

Discriminise against a religionised motherfucker wit the white behind
Motherfucker wit the black behind ya cant help but catch this ryhme
wooooooooooo
Shit be trippin in the city streets
pigs be slippin aint catchin us fiddlin wit those cannabis sheets
flippin trippin skippin down that yellow brick road
keep insistin we be winnin in that battle we hold
cant resist em keep insistin we aint takin em but we is
no you cant take a sample of my piss!
shiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttt
now in prison still be trippin cant stop me in here
suits be sellin it some guy wit a beard
2 more weeks, nearly there then im gone from this shit
no man i didnt take ya shit from ya drawer
i was in my cell till 3 in the morn
Yo motherfucker you wanna take this out side?
yo that a knife.... the wizard cant help me this time
dead

crazy shit

[Center Sight]

lmao yo this shit was funny.. unique way of rhyming actually.. simple but effective, was easy to read through.. room for improvement, and maybe better content, but it was a kool short verse.. keep doin ya thing

peep this...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172961

[Rekween]

lol yu made up some words, but the overal flow wasnt too bad. work on content

[Kairos]

Some lines could have been edited to help the flow. You could have set up the story better. Try not to stray off the topic you come up with.
Hit up one of my battles

[Rekween]

dude youre really not making any sense , try to have coherence

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.