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  1. February 25th, 2005, 06:38 PM #1
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    Top notch...

    Made best, deepend by thought n related to scheme...
    Perfection made it a dream, when realitys makin ya fiend...
    Like paste in the seam, or wasten supreme its not basic...
    Mistakes erased quick... Its lookin at you but u cant face it...
    Not messin up, always confessed n stuck, but overcome....
    Theres no second or third place, Theres only one......

    ~a~perfect~shot~....Ya~surface~top....notch....
    Others wait below..under u, while u cop squats....
    Its like trying to stop glocks, while there ~Under~the~aim~...
    Or dancing ~under~the~rain~..Only created right under the brain..
    Its there...ur ability..sometimes it makes nervouse...
    But always remember forever, practice makes perfect....


    just a quick keystyle.....peace
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  2. February 25th, 2005, 07:16 PM #2
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  3. February 25th, 2005, 08:05 PM #3
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173461
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  4. February 25th, 2005, 08:09 PM #4
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...26#post2112626
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  5. February 25th, 2005, 08:12 PM #5
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    uppin...? feedback? not feelin it?
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  6. February 25th, 2005, 08:14 PM #6
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    u wanna battle
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  7. February 25th, 2005, 09:11 PM #7
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    All Right Drop.
    Second Verse Was Garbage.
    Looks Like You Was Just Throwing Out Shit.
    Some Didn't Even Sense.
    Keep Elevatin.
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  8. February 25th, 2005, 10:27 PM #8
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    thanks bro.... i could use critisism.... everyone can peace...
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  9. February 25th, 2005, 10:28 PM #9
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    no more freepostin... this is open mic ... u need a comment or a verse... peace
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  10. February 25th, 2005, 10:34 PM #10
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  11. February 26th, 2005, 01:31 AM #11
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    I liked the rhyming for this. Simple verse, put your concepts to a written and you'll have a more complete piece. Some alright vocab in there, keep that up. Keep practicing your rhyming, and you'll flow longer.
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