I spread bases, Studied hard, and learned basics
Strange faces, Crust buildings causing burned places
Flow's Hard, Tip 'burning smoke'- broke like cigars
All my lines are tight, Right like Technical guitar..
Tunderbolts reach the surface, For no purpose
Cut you in pieces and leave your organs in a termus
I'm epidemic, Burning tacks i'm half systemic
Casket matching, cementery ashes blowing accademics
the vocab was good, u used multis and punches were decent. nothing special tho, but ok concepts.
btw leave 2 links.
The verse was short, looked like you might have cut yourself off. You had some alright ideas, and vocab was good. Work on keeping your flow longer to length your pieces.
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Well Fam it was a lil to short for my likin...the vocab its self was aight...content was a bit average..i noticed only a few multie's...but keep droppin n elevate man...
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