Mindless Mindset

[CALIPH]

this was ok you need to expand on shit more to make better imagery on this and show a better picture also you have good emotion but like i see in a lot of newer poets you fail to move on the topic slowly its like your jumping around all over the place wit it it was overall a decent piece still i like how you described certain things emotion was good but would be better if thought out more this is nice i say just keystyle dont write and edit and shit it kills emotion in your poetry

[Facts Machine]

nice peice. well written and subliminal.
hard to understand it, but the concept's dope.

[Irrelevance]

this was ok you need to expand on shit more to make better imagery on this and show a better picture also you have good emotion but like i see in a lot of newer poets you fail to move on the topic slowly its like your jumping around all over the place wit it it was overall a decent piece still i like how you described certain things emotion was good but would be better if thought out more this is nice i say just keystyle dont write and edit and shit it kills emotion in your poetry

i never edit my rap battle things....