User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: IE: Beyond The Asteroid Belt

  1. #1
    MythDirection
    Guest

    IE: Beyond The Asteroid Belt

    vs. Jai-Cee
    --------------
    oh please girl,
    why did you never let me grieve?
    our chemical romance was always falling and calling
    for me to leave and you let me believe
    that our apartment was terra firma
    drawing arms warmed with embrace of mother earth
    and the dirt was cursed
    yet, you let me believe
    three cheers for the street
    and the mars bar that always had a smooth jazz beat
    a strong drink to bring me to the brink
    i looked outside to see the cars drive by
    and like stars collide
    as if it was pride, yes ours, don't deny
    the space between us belies

    now, now, now, don't say that i haven't won
    it was, was, was backwards and you know I saw
    your evil on display twenty-four, seven and live
    just part of this part where i discover the trap

    OooooooooOooooooooOooooooooo

    I can hear it! I can hear the space birds coup
    they call me to do what i thought i couldn't do
    DREAM
    feel outside the stiched seams
    look beyond the galaxy and not take it all as it seems

    i'm past you...
    i'm past you lavender smelling hair colored like solor flares
    i'm over you...
    i'm over your haunting sigh sadder than the northern lights
    i've forgotten you...
    i've forgotten the lips that ripped a whole in me where a black hole fits

    i'm beyond the asteroid belt...
    I'm beyond everything that you meant to me....
    and everything that i felt
    Last edited by MythDirection; February 20th, 2005 at 02:07 AM

  2. #2
    MythDirection
    Guest
    hi everybody!

  3. #3
    You've Earned a Custom Title! sNoopfox's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Nottingham
    Age
    40
    Posts
    328
    Hah...Hey myth!
    Don't worry i'll rep this, maybe 2morro...but you might not appreciate critique from an amature

    xXx
    Gone. Like Dust.

  4. #4
    MythDirection
    Guest
    you should just go vote on me and jai-cee's battle

    i put this here for all the people who are not in the league and might not be checking those poems

  5. #5
    You've Earned a Custom Title! sNoopfox's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    Nottingham
    Age
    40
    Posts
    328
    Im friends with Jai-Cee in real life, he lives in the flat below me.
    It'd wudnt be a fair vote. even if id vote for u

    xXx
    Gone. Like Dust.

  6. #6
    You've Earned a Custom Title! silent j's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2005
    Age
    35
    Posts
    1,678
    Battle Record
    10-6
    yeah that sweet keep dropping dope stuff

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    current battles


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

  7. #7
    MythDirection
    Guest
    ...

  8. #8
    MythDirection
    Guest
    hee hee i am getting silly votes in the battle and silly feed in here!

  9. #9
    ThaShauman
    Guest
    yo i felt that piece, made me re-read and imagine it to a T

    very pleasing homie

Similar Threads

  1. Asteroid almost hit the earth today
    By @ThisIsPumper in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 12
    Last Post: June 28th, 2011, 08:52 PM
  2. Asteroid Could Hit Earth In 2029
    By Raptor Jesus in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 24
    Last Post: October 31st, 2007, 01:37 AM
  3. Apple Asteroid?
    By Zed Peace in forum The Studio
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: September 10th, 2006, 12:43 PM
  4. Orions Belt
    By Monstrous in forum Closed Battles
    Replies: 161
    Last Post: September 21st, 2005, 11:18 AM
  5. Asteroid bullshit.
    By Devion Stokes in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: June 6th, 2004, 09:36 AM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •