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Thread: One Verse Feedback

  1. #1
    QUE
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    One Verse Feedback

    Im new to this site/but not new to the streets
    im hear to say a lot of yall ryhmes are weak
    try ta flow back on second thought btch u betta just delete
    yall cant compete wit me its serious
    my flowz got yall so shaked up u delirious
    i throw mo bows than luda
    so go home and pray to ya buda(buddists)
    my ryhmes pack mo power than a mine
    just remeber Que is here ta steal ya dymes
    so pack up ya nines cuz i come in peace
    nah truth is im here to icrease the deceased
    so when u type my name count it as defeat
    ------------------------------------------------------
    this is just a quick 12 bar
    tell me what i need ta work on


  2. #2
    0meGa
    Guest
    i need to see more of ya work...so far you aight...jus expand that vocab..and do tha unexpected..

  3. #3
    Simplicity
    Guest
    yeah you aiight son..
    i can't tell you "do this, do that" cuz i'm a newbie..
    but stay active kid!
    .1.

  4. #4
    shit whats up DirtBoy69's Avatar
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    40
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    296
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    2-4
    it's good for a start it's kinda short but it flowed well the volcab wasn't anything special but it's a nice peice
    win loss record 11-14 with 5 k.o's



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