The cherubs molest

[DALC]

Serpentine cherubs regurgutating malignant depictions,
of child pornography and bleeding from the moral laceration,
of homosexuality and beastiality,aborted fetuses amalgamate,
to form a multicellular organsim and feast on their mother's uterus,
evangelic seraphs now poignant chewing on the umbilicus and,
the endothelial epithelium tissues of pregnant angels,
four phantasmal cognitive entities charge the armies of all religion,
and stammering;The lord of these useless parasites falls in his own,
blood,violently convulsing,maggots pulsating like a light beam permeating,
prolapsed gravity,pumping the orofice of celestial gateway with semantic,
carcinoembryonic fluids drained from the orbit of organomeralic elements,
insectioid messengers of damnation league with space,time,and nature;
these great leaders rip the intestinal contents from all false christians,
imprison the followers of the church,our ambition,to christen the coming,
of lucifer and to invision the coming of kindgdome damantion,
we rape the wives of our enimies using the intestinal tracts of their husbands,
as a well lubricated condomn and we torture and molest the animals and children,
from my hemoglobbin coated fingertips sprouts infinte rivers of bloody corpse,
my fetish,to slice my cancerous jaws through the flesh of angelic messengers,
oh,its almost orgasmic,the conglomerating perenial lifeforms on the feilds of death,
resemble dactyloctenium aegypticum,euclidean neolithic megaliths are erected,
to serenade the gods of destruction and these revolving around one constructed obelisk.
honoring me,civilization sacraficing its virgin vaginal saunas to my cause and statue,
I mutilate the anantomy of children and molest helpless animals and vermin,
like a parasitic organism,i am occupant of society's body,convulsing with the consumption,
of nutrients and fluids,i question the authnintecity of the prophecies contained in the bible,
un-intellectually constructed,this worthless guid to nothingness is banished from my kningdomes,
the innocent people i view as physically unatractive are forced to perform fallatio upon,
my dogs and to insert there erect phallus into the anal cavity of my swines and horses,
and the mentally incapable and physically handicapted are tied down and operated on alive,
i mastrabate into their still beating heart and lick it up,only to vomit it back up into their organs,
i defecate into there abdominal region and consume that too,urinate into their sliced open bladder,
pregnant women have their uterus cut open and i feed on the unborn child inside it,
im cannabalistic,the dead are sliced apart and served to me,my maggoty viral infested defecation,
mixed with cow's bloody urination,its bladder sliced and strung with another bovine intestin,
on its back,the bacteria breeding ground concotion seved to me with the broth of drained pig/s blood,and i molest the angels and smirk as
iconoclasts suck my dick.

[DALC]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...82#post2075782

[DALC]

The poet's license.
I didnt puntuate normally or capatalze for a reason.

[DALC]

This is my kind of a fucking valentines poem.

[DALC]

upppin

[DALC]

upppin

[Space Cadet]

wow very explicit, ummm hmmm. really good vocab especially in first couple of bars. i noticed the lines started getting longer, i guess you meant to do this for effect? I like the flow, it really rolls off your tongue. I must say i didnt understand some of it. keep it up

[demonseed]

crazy in a good fashion..but hard on the eyes and some minds.
I got that oldschool death metal feel from it, which is cool as hell..cause I still miss the
good old days. No matter...u prolly wont get too many hits due to the long length of the piece, but you did that on purpse, to sort out the fools whom you prolly DONT want to read it anyhow!
Werd
any how ..BLAZE on

[bigdumbelephant]

Didnt read the whole thing yet, but will. One very objective suggestion - dont shrink the font. Some of us are not curious about the life of the blind.

[Piscean Twin]

Very graphic and ‘dirty’ as in unclean not as in raunchy – if you know what I mean - though it is explicit in detail. It is supposed to be symbolic of something right? I’m just not sure what, help me out please? As for the poem itself, a few lines turned into word salads, even though I got the gist of things. I like the beginning part (from “serpentine cherubs” to “light beam permeating”). That was good.

[Bruklor]

Your parents are doctors, and there's tons of medical dictionaries laying around your house, isn't there? Stop reading words then writing them. Writing for the point of being a dickhead with shit verses doesn't make you special.

I read you trying anything different from Medical/Dictionary vereses, it proved that you're a shit writer. "Suicide Note". You proved you're completely one dimensional. You get all these kids responding to Medical Dictionary rhymes saying you're great, only because they don't understand the shit you're talking about, and don't want to sound stupid. A doctor wouldn't even appreciate your bullshit. How can you actually write that. I mean, you know you literally sit there with a dictionary, and a medical dictionary infront of you and write from it. You think that's talent?

If RB were to ever ban someone on their writing style, it should be now.

[DALC]

Theres not even a medical term in this,maybe one or two but i didnt even intend for that,it just fell in.No my parents arnt doctors.I know things so i put them in my writing.
If your telling me you cant understand this,then theres something wronge.

[Bruklor]

I pity you.

[DALC]

^ i pity you

[Bruklor]

You have no ability to come back. That's the second time you've done that. First time I said you were pathetic, the next you said what I said. Lmfao. Such a sucker. Uncreative bitch ass punk.