I'm happy

[conquistador]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170017


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post2069754




Finally I've learned the do's and do not's
About to trade in my whip and get a new blue drop
I'm leanin em with house premiums
and I'm only 20 schemeing tons
I used to struggle now I'm having fun
Got enough cake to smile for
watching the knicks from row 4
CLK500 2 door
not cause I move raw
Because I moved raw
And ducked and dodged the long arm of the law
Chicks froze in aww
upon sight
I hit all home runs ain't get no strikes
I don't know how to fabricate
This real life but you asking to get robbed with real ice

[WhiteNoise]

ah bro i wans't feelin this........it lacked structure, it messed me up on the rhymes,about the rhymes u used some of the same words twice like this "not cause I move raw Because I moved raw" not feelin that...but it wasn't that bad of a drop.....keep spittin bro............

[WhiteNoise]

oh yea i got to get some votes on these been goin for wayyyy too long...lets close these battles up....

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170465
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170629

[Meters]

you're good, keep doing this. fuck RB and it's conventional structure (which i use)

[conquistador]

thanks...I know I sucked on this drop but it was what I was feeling. You ain't gonna feel everything I drop...that's just the way it is. But you gonna feel most of it.