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    quick keystyle, hollatme

    my styles never came before like a four year old boy
    size thirteen shoes the rumors are true
    my dick is fucking huge
    i tossed my mic on the floor, you tossed mike by the door
    you a faggot dick rider, i'm covered in whores
    pockets filled like pours, dirty money, clean money
    mix and match, honeys on the dungarees, hittin ass
    pitchin the pike into the haystack
    the needle is lost, i spit acapella since way back
    since osh kosh bigosh, tick tock watch the clock
    ya time is coming up, blinds are riding up
    the sun is exposed, blood suckers afloat
    i'm walking the streets dead to my live music
    fuck what people think, why hide ya two cents
    hoppin over fences, running from sirens
    used to play sports but i didn't get high then
    girls best friend call me shiny grimey diamond
    simon says get naked bitches, so they do it
    pulled out my dick, soaked the pussy and slid through it
    ya'll niggas ain't sick ya'll spitting bit music
    touchdown the superbowl has a new winner
    netr the king, crown connected to the sinner
    eating mc's as appatizers, tracks for dinner

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    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    fuckin ill piece ki, tight multis,tight punches,tight wordplay,nice fuckin imagery and rhyme scheme, all in all this piece was ill as fuck,kinda short but thats till tight.keep droppin tha hotness kid.~1~


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  3. #3
    Quote Originally Posted by DiverseSyndicate
    fuckin ill piece ki, tight multis,tight punches,tight wordplay,nice fuckin imagery and rhyme scheme, all in all this piece was ill as fuck,kinda short but thats till tight.keep droppin tha hotness kid.~1~
    Are you serious?

    I thought this was dire, im sorry man but I thought it was awful...

    I tossed my mic on the floor, you tossed mike by the door...

    Seriously, wtf>

    Im sorry for the hate but I thought this was really bad, elevate a lot son.

    Peep my piece though....
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=170031

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    Dune Methane CrazyCarl's Avatar
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    I thought it was alright. You had some nice lines, good concepts for some of them. Others needed some work, better phrasing. Line length was good, some could have been edited to be more uniform. Keep the wordplay up.
    Return the feedback
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168531

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    This was decent the vocab and structure was fine.
    Your flow was nice in a couple of bars but it was inconsistent you had a couple of nice punches in there the last 2 lines were hot.

    Hit this up.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=169972

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