lol..if suicide actually solved anything...
not bad...reminds me of this poem by adrian mitchell about norman ...can't remember his last name...the dude who burned himself alive in front of the white house to protest vietnam
lol..if suicide actually solved anything...
not bad...reminds me of this poem by adrian mitchell about norman ...can't remember his last name...the dude who burned himself alive in front of the white house to protest vietnam
Bittersweet
Dalc, there is such a thing as trying to hard. Thats why your other poetry receives such negative feedback.Originally Posted by DALC
This was the most raw honest and earthy write you ve dropped here, and its by far the best piece Ive read of yours thus far. It was human, written on pure emotion and thought.
Not over a 3 week period where your lust for complicated thinking takes over and really removes the human element, making your normal style seem forced and mechanical.
My only good night's sleep,
Here in the bed of my literature.
Such a beautiful write from so dark a concept.
Im glad you reconsidered.
Cheers.
^Im still writing with my old style which may not be apreciated by you,i know that.
But whats the point of writing if we cant annoy someone?
This was horribly written.
Not written in an emotional style of a suicidal person, nor in a style that makes people think about things deeply. It was like a newbie looking for a topic.
^exactly,this is not good.
I shitted this out in one second.
Pathetic. You sound like Eminems muse.
^Your pathetic.
That...was a comeback?
^I dont know what else to tell you.
your just some fucking idiot that cant keep out of my threads.
Lmao. Of course not, it's obligatory that I do this too you. Have you read anything you've ever typed? Christ, you suck so far, at everything you've ever done here on RB.
^no.
You got a big stain of rich, stinking irony running down the side of your leg.
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