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Thread: Week 7 Heavyweight Championship (8-0) Black Flame Vs (7-0) Chicken

  1. #1
    Massive
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    Week 7 Heavyweight Championship (8-0) Black Flame Vs (7-0) Chicken

    30 LINE MAX..


    VERSES DUE FRIDAY,TRY TO HAVE THEM IN BY WEDNESDAY!!


    VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR VOTES WILL BE DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.

  2. #2
    Chicken
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    8-1 isn't THAT bad of a record.

  3. #3
    naw but 9-0 is better but 7-1 is not bad though still descent
    I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter


    Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant

  4. #4
    Chicken
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    Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
    I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You
    Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt?
    It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt
    Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids
    And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless
    Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure
    I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather
    Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
    And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name
    Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick
    When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships
    Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
    But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films
    Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real
    If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals
    This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes
    And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat
    Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics
    And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It
    You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
    You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody
    Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts
    You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote
    Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
    I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks
    You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This
    I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs
    Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
    So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"

  5. #5
    posting soon
    I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter


    Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant

  6. #6

    here is my verse

    things to know chicken=listen=case sentive


    at battle time i don't even acknowledge
    this child, just another wack textcee that
    bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make
    sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a
    girl out the way i am eating a chick in/
    i'll serve you with a break fast just like
    dennies whore, your like 90 year old
    models your not looking good anymore/
    scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
    text shit, you could be a runaway patient
    and couldn't make a sick exit/ this battle
    your losing it like going senile, you like
    Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex
    is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you
    listen to text/ i'm not gay so quit trying 2
    do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
    herbed by a newbie/the only way you
    getting head from a chick if you behead
    her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
    Hip hop better then you/I'll make u show ur
    brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating
    me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/
    like a barber i take off the top, this herb
    will get dropped, like weed dealers running
    from the cops/ like a uterus I'll envelop ya
    child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
    develop a style/ you don't like women you
    prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your
    wedding dress and couldn't prevail/ you never
    lead like a chaser you always follow, the only
    reason you eat kids is because you swallow/
    your not looking good like a whores health,
    i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
    your full of your self/

    editing because of spelling mistakes peace
    Last edited by Massive; July 20th, 2002 at 10:05 AM
    I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter


    Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant

  7. #7
    TyVo
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    this was a close battle. imma go wit black flame. he had a little better word play and punch lines. but chicken ya verse was aiight too. holla.

    vote:Black Flame

  8. #8
    MC4Eyez
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    Ill battle.

    Chicken...
    The beginning was hot. Nice personals. Also, the personal about the battle with Liquid Flame was tight too. Ill multis throughout.

    I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather
    Ill wordplay. Ahhh!
    When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships
    Damn.
    Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
    I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks
    Nice.

    Black Flame...
    Nice verse. Some solid punches and good multis.

    it's like i was eating a
    girl out the way i am eating a chick in
    Your best line.

    like a uterus I'll envelop ya
    child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
    develop a style
    This was nice too.

    Vote: Chicken for an overall excellent verse with more hard hitting punches and personals.

    Peace

  9. #9

    i just noticed

    your not looking good like a whores wealth
    naw it should be *Health*
    I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter


    Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant

  10. #10
    Slutbag ToNe-E's Avatar
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    I Enjoyed readin This Battle..You Both Were pretty Even In Punches And Both Came Hard..This Was A hard battle To Decide A Winner..Chicken You Came pretty Nyce With Some Raw Punches..And A Okay Flow..Black Flame Your Shit Was Nyce Too..I Think You Came A Little Harder With The Punches Tho..Just A Tad Better..LMAO@The Line Talkin About How Chicken Got Herbed By A Newbie, That Was Me..I Didn't Kno Chicken Was Case Sensitive..Hah That Battle Was Old As Fuck..Anyways..You Had A Tight Flow..Off At Times But Tight..So Black Flame gets My Vote..It Was verry Hard To Decide..But I Read Both Verse's Again And I Think Black Flame Got This With Okay Personals And Dope Punches..Here Are Some Lines I Was Feelin..

    Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
    I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks - Chicken
    Really Feelin This..It Hit Hard..

    the only way you
    getting head from a chick if you behead
    her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
    Hip hop better then you/ - Black Flame
    I Liked That Line..Dopeness..

    I Would Go Into More Detail But Its Late And Im Tired As Fuck..

    Vote - Black Flame

  11. #11
    Massive
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    UP

  12. #12
    PROphet
    Guest

    Vote=blackflame

    B/C he came wit more punches, harder punches, and he was more original...eventho both yall had some played lines here and there
    Listen
    Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
    ^thats been played and flipped so many times

    I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs
    ^also really played

    besides your first & last couple of barz flowing well you really didnt have nothing to eye popping

    black flame
    scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
    text shit, you could be a runaway patient
    and couldn't make a sick exit
    ^this was an highlight
    the only way you
    getting head from a chick if you behead
    her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
    Hip hop better then you
    ^another highlight

  13. #13
    Massive
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    BREAKDOWN::

    LISTEN=CHICKEN


    Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
    I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You

    DECENT OPENER HERE,SETUP WAS COOL,PUNCH I FELT COULD OF CAME ALITTLE HARDER BUT GOOD


    Left Me Confused, Saw Your Skill, How’d You Get The Belt?
    It Was A No-Show Win Against Phynam, Because You’re Less Than Felt

    PRETTY GOOD PERSONAL HERE,THOUGHT COULD OF BEEN HARDER,


    Wrecked And Dealt, Like Adoption Agencies, I Own Kids
    And My Style’s So Ruthless And Flawless It’s Virtually Homeless

    NICE SHIT HERE,SETUP AND PUNCH GOOD,PUNCH WASNT REALLY HARD HITTING


    Know This, Herb Is Weak, I’ll Easily Fuck Him At Leisure
    I Reign In This Battle, And You’re Right Under The Weather

    I FELT THIS WAS FILLER HERE,SETUP WAS USELESS TO THE SECOND COUPLET FOR THE PUNCH


    Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
    And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name

    THIS WAS USED WELL I WAS FEELING THIS PERSONAL HERE
    NICE PUNCH ALSO



    Abusing The Lame, Worships Me, He Think He’s Sick
    When I Make You Bow Down Like Fucking Sinking Ships

    NOT FEELING THIS ,FELT IT WASNT WORDED WELL AND PRETTY MUCH UNEFFECTIVE


    Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
    But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films

    AGAIN NOT TOO HARD HITTING BUT WAS COOL,I WAS FEELING THIS ,BUT PRETTY MUCH A PLAYED CONCEPT.


    Battered And Drilled, Want To Win? You’ll Have To Get Real
    If We’re Going Blow For Blow, Like Gay Oral Sex Deals

    COOL,NOT REALLY FEELING THIS


    This Vet Feels, I’ll Rock Your Post Until You Lost The Votes
    And It Took You Long Enough To Realise That You’re Not The Goat

    LOL,THIS WAS COOL,MADE ME LAUGH ALITTLE ,NOT TOO EFFECTIVE THOUGH BUT FUNNY


    Drop My Foe, Shouts: “He’s The Illest!”, I’ll Eat Your Lyrics
    And Fuck Clubs, I’ll Hold A Grudge And Still Beat You With It

    OK,REWORDED BETTER WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE



    You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
    You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody

    OK ,DECENT PERSONAL,NOT HARD THOUGH



    Broke Emcee, I’ll Down Your Wrotes And Clown Your Posts
    You Had A Mental Breakdown When You Weren’t Aloud To Vote

    NOT FEELING THIS



    Clown Gets Broke, Fool’s Crushed, Blacks Out Like The Ku-Klux
    I’d Hit You Again, If I Honesty Couldn’t Give Two Fucks

    I THOUGHT SETUP WAS NICE BUT THIS COUPLET WAS UNEFFECTIVE CAUSE YOUR SECOND LINE WAS NOT HITTING HARD,FELT THE PUNCH WAS REALLY WEAK.



    You’ll Lose, Slut, Fuck This Bitch, I’ve Had Just About Enough Of This
    I’ll Knock The Breadth Out Your Chest When I Crush Your Ribs

    THIS WAS DECENT,I FELT IT,


    Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
    So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"

    COOL ENDING ,NOT PARTICULARLY HARD,BUT WAS COOL



    BLACKFLAME

    at battle time i don't even acknowledge
    this child, just another wack textcee that
    bites abolish's style/ i'll stab you to make
    sure i stick in, it's like i was eating a
    girl out the way i am eating a chick in/

    THIS WAS PRETTY GOOD OPENER,WITH A GOOD PERSONAL IN THE SETUP AND A GOOD PUNCH FOR THE SECOND COUPLET



    i'll serve you with a break fast just like
    dennies whore, your like 90 year old
    models your not looking good anymore/
    scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
    text shit, you could be a runaway patient
    and couldn't make a sick exit/


    THIS I WAS FEELING EXSPECIALLY THE SECOND COUPLET THE SICK EXIT PUNCH,THE SETUP WAS COOL,BUT THE PUNCH WAS NICE




    this battle
    your losing it like going senile, you like
    Ru Paul just a faggot in denial/ convex
    is fixin' to flex, tell me this how can you
    listen to text/

    SETUP WAS BLAH,PRETTY MUCH FILLER TO ME, THE SECOND LINE WAS COOL,BUT REALLY NOT A HARD HITTING PUNCH.



    i'm not gay so quit trying 2
    do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
    herbed by a newbie/the only way you
    getting head from a chick if you behead
    her mental , you win? ha Kangaroos know
    Hip hop better then you/

    SETUP WAS OK,IF REWORDED WOULD OF BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE,I FELT THE KANGAROO PUNCH WAS NICE GOOD HARD HITTER



    I'll make u show ur
    brains the way i hack heads, stop sweating
    me u need to Kick Rocks like ex crack heads/
    like a barber i take off the top, this herb
    will get dropped, like weed dealers running
    from the cops/

    THIS RIGHT HERE WAS OK,NOT REALLY FELLING ANYOF THE LINES



    like a uterus I'll envelop ya
    child, you could be a hair dresser and couldn't
    develop a style/ you don't like women you
    prefer to see mail, bitch you can try on your
    wedding dress and couldn't prevail/

    NOT REALLY FEELING THIS EITHER,WEDDING DRESS SHIT WAS COOL,BUT PLAYED



    you never
    lead like a chaser you always follow, the only
    reason you eat kids is because you swallow/
    your not looking good like a whores health,
    i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
    your full of your self/

    [b]UMM GOOD ENDING HERE,I LIKED THE LINE EAT KIDS IS BECAUSE YOU SWALLOW THAT WAS COOL, THE FULL OF YOUR SELF LINE WAS ALSO COOL,PRETTY GOOD SHIT


    BOTH VERSES WERE VERY NICE,I FELT BLACK EDGED THIS CAUSE HE HAD MORE PUNCHES IN HIS VERSE,LISTEN I FELT CAME NICE,FLOW WAS REALLY WELL,NEEDED SOME MORE PUNCHES IN YOUR VERSE MAN,BUT IT WAS A NICE VERSE


    VOTE BLACK FLAME

  14. #14
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    tha battle was hott, but black flame got it cuz he had hotter punches and a nice flo.

    vote:blackflame

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  15. #15
    *UnFuckWithAbLe*
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    Iiight This was a really nice battle ..
    i'll start wit chicken ..

    "Never To Lose, The Title Holder’s Wrecked And Then Bruised
    I Could Post A Wack Verse And Use Your Style Better Than You"


    Damn That was dope as Fuck .. haha it made me laugh ..

    "Screwed And Bruising Your Game, I’m Confusing This Flame
    And You Couldn't Have Beaten Liquid Without Using My Name"


    That was a nice personal .. Very dope

    "Bitch Is Ripped, Lacking The Skill, You Say Your Rapping Is Ill
    But You’re Just Playing Yourself, Like Autobiographical Films"


    This was crayz .. It was prolly my favorite line of the match ..

    "You’re Hopeless, See, Posting Frees? Just Freeposting Overly
    You Say I Beat Nobodies, When You Just Beat Nobody"


    Haha ..that was nice .. it made me laugh .. Nice wordplay ..

    "Touch This Kid, Spit’s Gone Missing, Throat’s Slit And Dripping
    So Here's A New Quote For Your Sig: "I Just Got Ripped By Chicken"


    That was an iight endin .. you could have made it better .. Dope Verse Chicken .. Much respect ..

    Now on to Black Flame ~

    "at battle time i don't even acknowledge
    this child, just another wack textcee that
    bites abolish's style/"


    This was a nice personal .. Dope line .. and a nice start ..

    "i'll serve you with a break fast just like
    dennies whore, your like 90 year old
    models your not looking good anymore/"


    This was an iight line .. although i felt it was played as fuck .

    "scared to pick up a mic so you stick to
    text shit, you could be a runaway patient
    and couldn't make a sick exit/"


    OMG .. This line was dope as fuck .. DAmn . . i loved this one

    "i'm not gay so quit trying 2
    do me ,ur case sensitive? that's why u got
    herbed by a newbie/"


    Um .. haha .. U.E. Beat Listen ? .. i peeped that battle .. Listen could have came much doper .. lmao ..

    "your not looking good like a whores health,
    i'll drown you in your blood to prove that
    your full of your self/"


    Kinda .. iight endin .. could have been better .. either way .. dope verse ..

    Final Decision:

    OK .. Chicken came dope as fuck .. i was feelin most of his lines .. he came really nice .. Black flame came nice .. but i didnt quote as much of his shit .. cause most of the end of the verse .. was gettin Really played .. Like there were all like "chicken couldnt" "Like" / .. Then the next line would be almost the same but just another played line .. i dunno .. i feel chicken came dope here and i was a great battle ..

    MY VOTE- CHICKEN

    -payce

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