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  1. #1

    winter's allegory

    Grandiloquent is the dialect of translucent concrete,
    and euclidean monuments of lipsoidal creatures,
    spherical are the shards of ice,perpendicular to the vegetation,
    used to erect gelid observant perception sitting idle.

    Verba obscura;sesquepadalian are these messages-
    as they recount visual,verbal gangrene paintings,
    frostbitten logolepts with no phronistery,
    save the fireplace-sheltered from spidery extrimity.
    The frozen source of life...
    Hung predicate in allegory...

    Complexy is the simplicity in the nature of it,
    The infinitely extending green stairwells to the sky-
    now coated with a transparrent solidified exterior,
    of mollecular secretion setting scilent at rest,
    masquerading soul.

    Iconoclastic incognito intricately inlaid,in cognition,
    Oh,but that volcanic sauna of milky brown erruption restores-
    visualization.
    As the white dewys cascade in the murky depths,
    and the metalic aircraft from unknown lands instigates chaos,
    and crashes into the volcanic slush to bend techtonic plates,
    and allow the unstable surface to settle now flourishing;
    enriched.

  2. #2
    There are very VERY potent metaphors in here.
    I want to see if anyone can grasp them.
    Has to do with winter too.


    Especially this

    Complexy is the simplicity in the nature of it,
    The infinitely extending green stairwells to the sky-
    now coated with a transparrent solidified exterior,
    of mollecular secretion setting scilent at rest,
    masquerading soul.

  3. #3
    i was feeling this sounded nice n all but ayo i aint grasp it i wont lie and it aint because it isn't good...Its because im tired and if it isnt simple its hard for me right now lol but all in all you used great vocab keep it up

  4. #4
    Yeah,my english professor who studies poetry said it was some of the best hes read.
    he took time to study it too..so,ya know.
    This is real poetry,and it will have to be read more then ounce.
    Last edited by DALC; February 3rd, 2005 at 09:56 PM

  5. #5
    Great poetry slept on.

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