D.W.
i'm back for this worthless bitch, so dun't think bout leavin...
cuz ya got a record on RV, n i got the link to you cheatin
ok opener...
Your stupid in fact, abusive, n loosin in rap...
so give it up to my boot, cuz it put ya crew on the map
Nice multi, nice personal.
Ya soundclick is incredible, when it comes to the beats...
plus i'm still suprised, on which ones the emcee
didnt get this bar, so we will just say decent.
ya on a quest for glory, but that's alredy in question
like you makin any sense...chargin a penny a lesson
lol.
Werdz will leave ya chokin, like down the wrong pipe
but after listenin to ?uest, even the pope sounds tight
lol.
Ya out of ya league, so go back to the vixens...
cuz ya bout a year off, any kind of a presence
ok.
Blinded by essence, cuz ya use it in showers...
but to be all you can be, is a bouquet of flowers
didnt really like the ender.
good verse over all. Liked the flow, and most of the bars.
?uest.
Start off with the quote style was shit man, never do that again.
Bad start already.
You’re a fake mc, who got monotonous flows to be specific
I got this shit down to a science, define the laws of physics
No punch here. Filler
A crease n ur shoe is da biggest impression dat u'll eva~make
for heavens sake not even GOd could help dis herb elevate
First line a little stretched, second line help alittle with the multi, ok punch.
My different strokes will cut your life short like Gary Coleman
this bitch couldn’t post clean shit if he tried to cleanse his colon
Nah.
Your physical matrix doesn’t exist, all there is are wack lyrics
dangerous werdz penetrated his soul and leave him with a holy spirit
NO.
It’s not an optional decision to lacerate these edible opposites
you set many obstacles so I cant elevate as an incredible apocalypse
Alright multi in first line, second line went straight to the last word in its sentence.
i am on RV as d.j em sce
and i got more kids feeling me than a Michael Jackson trilogy
Matter of fact your crew wack and it got me saying WOW literally
Feeding from his verse is auto lose in most cases, but, either way, it doesn't seem like it's going to matter here. Oh, and btw, the bar was way to stretcehed and the punch was horrible.
see all your battles get slept so its up to me to get the votes
becuase this nigga is so wack he just got merked by a quote.
Decent ender, alright punch.
You need to elevate more to win though, your lines are to stretched and your lacking creative concepts. Keep working.
V-D.W.
