Just A Little Topic :::mary Jane And Her Sweet Sweet Taste

[DyMoNiK]

there aint no point to spit...just make sure tha joint is lit...
take a hit...empty the bong water...so i can annoint wit it...
my weed has been blessed...inhale that smoke in chest...
wit all this talk of weed...im sure its peaked ya interest...
you best to invest...in that shit we've named buddha...
your shits all the same buddha...send some lame buddha...
this must be a game to ya...but this is my job...my life...
my very soul...do you carry a bowl...no...well do you have papers...
maybe a blunt...smoke this shit out front...
see the cops rolling thru...this weeds got me lifted...
plus im rolling too...give the bowl to you...
so that the cops keep driving past...
i didnt put in on the drugs...but i threw 5 on the glass...
i finally feel alive at last...quick pack another pipe...
this seems like any other night...watch my brothers fight...
over who will get to take first hit...
i just got some dam good X...i can make worse shit....
but why do that and fuck up my sales...
shut the fuck up yours failed...best to tuck up your tails...
and run to the cops narking...man when im on a burn cruise...
i need to stop parking....just ride and toke...try this smoke...
inhale exhale...looks like you tried to choke...
cuz you keep on coughing...sleep in coffins...cuz u a weed head...
and they the nocturnal type...i smoke til its ash...take the pot n burn it white...
wait til it hits my mouth...to finally call it cashed...
you've seen SCARFACE...he aint got nothing on me ive got the tallest stash...
the smallest hash...you can find in chi town...
so much smoke makes me nautious...i need to lie down...

[Foreshadow]

This was an okay drop as well. You had a good flow and the content was okay. I like the description it was kind of a story but it wasnt nice job. I wrote a long ass piece to the cypher topic you said. raided by the cops or some shit you should peep it..

[youngsolja05]

it wuz iight dude keep on doin ya thing and guarantee you'll be on top!
Rating 6.5/10

[sick thoughtz]

this was kind of shady at first but towards the end made up foward good drop

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

uhhh it was okay... you did okay, I thought it was a bit on the weaker and cheesier side of things but i cant say much but keep elevating dun.

[Thrust]

i came in here to read it cuz i'm a pot smoker myself. the piece all together wasn't all to well though. you need to up your game a bit in the nicest way. the flow was off pretty bad at some points, and this read is something i'd expect from a basic mainstream rapper.

[DyMoNiK]

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