First Post (We Don't F***k Around) Unlimited Soldiers

[BaNe Da IlLeSt]

Yo I spit a lethal injection,rhymes 2 perfection//
leaving different impressions,never stressing//
I keep niggas guessing,my styles a blessing//
who u think u testing,1 shot and i'll leave ya foreva resting//
So how u wanna get down?We can shoot da one or u could bring ya crew,it don't matta//
U know how U.S. gets down,we don't fuck around//
we'll murder u clowns,loaded tecs and 4pounds//
u know how that sounds,we'll invade ya towns//
come 2 my hood and we'll leave u faggots on da ground//
u can't strike me down,u niggas is like bowling pins 2 me//
I keep knocking ya asses down,I rep Brick City,da illest town//
Bane is da name if u don't know me u betta ask around//
I leave bodies lying on da ground//
I'm down.....with da illest murderous team "U.S. Unlimited Soldiers"//
we all about divine,murda and scheme//
when it comes 2 murda we leave no evidence at da scene//
it's evident we clean,I got that coke and weed that'll make u lean//
we all about da green....Nigga!

(HOOK X3)
See me in da street nigga and imma spark da heat//
that'll tear ya meat,my team is elite//
hard 2 defeat,i got blades that'll swipe ya feet//

I'm straight from da gutta,I even got blades that'll slice u up like butta//
u fuckas after u hear this be like after BANE,there is no other//
my flowz sound like thunda,i'm no stunna//
I use 2 wonder....where my life was headed//
now that i'm da booth,I only speak da truth//
I was made 2 be on da mic,my flowz too tight//
when I blast da heat I make niggas see da light//



That's all I got for now...Will be finished soon..gimme some feedback and let me know what ya'll think so far.....1

[BaNe Da IlLeSt]

gimme some feedback..........

[sILLable]

it was aiight,too gangsta wanna be,and u talked about leavin bodies on the ground too much,actually u just said "bodies" and "ground" too much,u had a small rhyme scheme goin but nothing fancy,no multis,no vocab,u pretty much just repeated yourself too much,u got potential though,try to lose tha gangsta touch and pick up some true lyricism.keep elevatin man.~1~

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[sick thoughtz]

yo what up kid whats the deal brick city thats what up im up on hawthorne baby where you at kid get back at me this piece was nice i feel your style keep posting up holla atcha boy