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  1. January 29th, 2005, 12:07 PM #1
    sick thoughtz
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    Question the hold up

    this is a hold up put your fuckin hands in the air/
    and no screaming i dont give a fuck if you scared/
    ill put your life on the edge with this gun in my hand/
    your face will get scanned and sealed like a can of spam/
    you will recognize that i am the man/
    have you saying my name 3 times like that crazy ass candy man/
    i want every thing in this bitch from cash to your stash of hash/
    dont try to past to fast or i will blast your ass/
    i like to shoot so give me a reason to buck off/
    press your luck off and get your head plucked the fuck off/
    i should be chillin with batman the way i be robbin/
    im about to get so much green im about to change my last name to goblin
    no use trying to stall because im not here for a long stay cant you tell/
    take all day and your ass is going to be sent on your way to hell/...

    to be contined............

    SICK THOUGHTZ IN THIS BITCH FOR THE 20-05 SEASON......
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  2. January 29th, 2005, 03:58 PM #2
    TheFatSkinny
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    flow is nice still.. lyrics are pretty str8 too, not feelin the spam line, but theres other that make up for it like the grren goblin line was dope still

    good looks and respects for the peep dogg


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  3. January 29th, 2005, 04:46 PM #3
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    this piece was aiight,rhyme scheme was a little off,not much though,good imagery,all in all not bad,keep elevatin.~1~


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  4. January 29th, 2005, 07:07 PM #4
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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
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  5. January 30th, 2005, 12:46 AM #5
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    Like Diverse said, the rhyme scheme was a little off, but not too bad. My favorite part was the "i want every thing in this bitch from cash to your stash of hash/
    dont try to past to fast or i will blast your ass/" line, cause that rhyme scheme is my favorite, a constant rhythm. And the word play was decent for the batman:robin, green:goblin punches.
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  6. January 30th, 2005, 05:29 AM #6
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    yeah..gettin to know your style..your alright at it....common theme...still good
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  7. January 30th, 2005, 05:08 PM #7
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    good looking out peoples
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  8. January 30th, 2005, 05:20 PM #8
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    this was shit.....straight and simple ass....he sounds like a nursery rap clown in training.......
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  9. January 30th, 2005, 05:23 PM #9
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    look who it is again the hater WHUT UP HATER
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  10. January 30th, 2005, 05:26 PM #10
    mc heartless
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    no....not hater....jus good observational skills....and that .....is why i know your skills are non-existant.....get a dictionary...
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  11. January 30th, 2005, 05:52 PM #11
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    bitch nigga
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