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    LaDy TrInItY
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    Whats in I love you

    Once thought of love as a special gift from that special person.//
    But now Its hard to even begin the word I can't say it.//
    Decepion and grief, I wont believe intil comes along that special person.//
    But when will I know he has come, I have to think and sit.//
    How will I know he wont break my heart like the rest of them.//
    How will I know its love instead of lust, i can't.//
    To me love has been a thing that i can only share with a friend.//
    My ex, he did not love, all he did was call me ugly and fat.//
    When will I know, when will it happen.//
    I'll never know, because no guy will not hurt me.//
    They all tell me, all it is, is sappy.//
    How can they tell me a lie, such as love, i can't let it be.//

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    papiswifey
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    thats deep. i really feel wutcha sayin. keep it up. one

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    LaDy TrInItY
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    hmm aight ...uppin

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    ::In cheesy french accent:: Ah, love. But of course it is the bane of all things false. ... I thought I was in love a long time ago, turned out I just had gas.

    Ookay, seriously babe, this is a great peice. I mean, I couldn't tell any flow from it though, but it's still thought provoking. Seemed like something you wrote thinking more with your head then heart. There is all sorts of love. Like the love between a man and a woman or the love between a man and a fine cuban cigar. (Personally I don't like cigars, so that leaves me with the first option.)

    Mo-Mentai.

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    I see where you coming from. Alot of dudes make iish all sappy just so they can get some booty. So it makes it hard on the real men. Just take ur time..don't rush. Don't give into every guy that comes along bu don't be so negative..you lose alot of good guys like that. Holla.
    TnA's eX-FiRsT LaDy, NoW RePPiN' S.o.L.o
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    hisTRYwreCKEr
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    nice piece

    very deep boo

    keep it up

    HOLLA

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