Lord if you hear me answer

[~ Game Face ~]

even though I got enough ice to get frostbite and a pinky ring big enough to make a lighthouse look like ya average flashlight
i still cant help but feel its somethin missin in my life
my kids actin like they done joined the bloods
cause at the age of two they use to give me kisses and hugs
now they on the corna of crenshaw chillin wit the thugs
they chillin wit tha same niggaz i did when i was a kid
now im worried about they safety cause they might get killed
it's bad enough my wife died from cancer
So Lord if you hear me please answer.

[Facts Machine]

I like this. good concept and good message.

[Foreshadow]

I believe that you would get alot more responces in the open mic with this piece.

[XeNtR!K]

^yea but it seems like it was written for poetry.. not to a beat or anythin.. but shit that shits deep homie, may the lord be there for you and your children.

cant say anythin wrong about this piece..

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