15-20 bars
no beef votes
no crew votes
due tomarrow
no feedin off other verse
15-20 bars
no beef votes
no crew votes
due tomarrow
no feedin off other verse
u get crushed like i did to ya girl-i-confess/
u get lifted like wheight when i curl-and-press/
so dont stress how u aint the best, u showin im #1 of the rest/
and dont feed off me like u do ya momma's brest/
cuz nobody alive could gimme a test, when i battle in text, who's next?/
rhymes is spiritual like the koran or the bible/
they sing em as hymes for church choir recytles/
take ya written verse thats so vitle, for u to do without would be change in style/
u pussy, i drain u to make my own Green Mile/
ya shittier than bile, passed through a newborn child/
crapped ya pants when my lyrics went buckwild/
u need to recognize the skills, and how u aint ill, thought u were untill.../
i tore this faggot, cuz he got ripped, each PUNCH-line will bust ya lip/
u cant try to flip these scripts, so u better get ya Bic and write this down/
my Dai Gao sound wit verbs and nouns is pound for pound the illest around.
yo sorry to freepost but yo can u vote on my battle wit lil d and i will vote on urs as soon as burnin spits aight
no problem. next time just e-mail me though.
since i'm on i guess i'll key some thin up right-quick
ayo ayo:
Gokfu,lil fuck, you got a death wish? cuz now you die~
only way you'd be 'hard' if all ur bull-shit 'petrafied'~
ur lost, but it's aight, the site don't need ya~
i'll hit you with some ill 'shit', an i got 'diarhea'~
batlin me's just ignorant, like speakin' chinese in Korea~
ur whole style is wack an all ur rhymes be shitty~
if u had any less talent they'd call u P. Diddy~
Gokfu SO gay he expiriences impotence at a J.Lo event~
my 2 cents burns you bitches slow when i vent, like incents~
battle me,fuck, it ain't battle, it's genocide~
Gokfu cried when he found out Versace died~
bitch, i'll rip you like ur moms pants, when she's jumpin around on one of her crazy rants~
till she passes out and u call an ambulance, an they try to carry her fat ass away, but cant!~
ur wack, so i don't give you much thought, you don't worry me~
when ur pre writting ur verse ur like "yo dogg, don't hurry me"~
ummm, BLAH, i hate battling, cuz i suck at itVOTE!
um both of u had some ok punches but gokfu u had such simple words in ur verse tha first 4 lines were confess, press, rest, breast but other ten tat it was ok
burnin well ur verse was ok but ur punches were a lil bit and i mean lil bit better ten gokfu
and again tis was a close match but vote goes to burnin
yo burnin check out my battle against lil d
umm ok here we go
my vote goes to burn due to the fact that his punches where betta
both verses where nice but i thnk yah need to put up yah vocab na mean
my vote go to burnin
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*New Wreckord*
29-1-27(kos)
*LLBL wreckord*
9-2
**Da LLBL's Last Eva Heavy Weight Champ Sk!llz**HAHA
SomE WhO GoT WaXeD: Elmo(2xKo), soy sauce(ko), amend(2xko'd), DaRk SkYz, Atheist, ..sIn..(2x), SmaCk DaDdY, NucLeaRConCepts, u.E aka IFV, lil South(3-0), Beatle Juice(ko'd)(4-0), Cei(ko'd)(4-0),
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aiight, and so every one knows, i keyed that in like 3 mins, cuz i figured that's what Gokfu did...
and Dark Intent, thanks for not hating cuz me and Cam was dissin for a while, i appreciate it
aight everything is all good aight
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*sTeAlTh Wreckord*
2-0-1
*New Wreckord*
29-1-27(kos)
*LLBL wreckord*
9-2
**Da LLBL's Last Eva Heavy Weight Champ Sk!llz**HAHA
SomE WhO GoT WaXeD: Elmo(2xKo), soy sauce(ko), amend(2xko'd), DaRk SkYz, Atheist, ..sIn..(2x), SmaCk DaDdY, NucLeaRConCepts, u.E aka IFV, lil South(3-0), Beatle Juice(ko'd)(4-0), Cei(ko'd)(4-0),
*CreWz WaXeD
("Dillemas" ko'd an banned) Critic, djskinz, ILLICIT aka "E", 12 Cylinders, ("Artificial Intelligence" 6-2) FacTorFiction, SmIrK(Lowd Mowf), JoKeR LP, MicDareall, (nex crew please!)
yo burnin just cause u had problems wit someone in tha crew doesnt mean u have a problem wit everyone in tha crew
aight good you guys, an me an Cam ain't even beefin any more,, it's just some cats are bitches and would've hated, it's good you guys aren't
uppin
Vote Some Body!
Vote= BurnIn
Came with better punchs, rhyme scheme was down good... Multis coulda been better.. an ya w/p (even tho some was a lil playd) came out way better..
^ lol 2nd bar was fati'll hit you with some ill 'shit', an i got 'diarhea'~
batlin me's just ignorant, like speakin' chinese in Korea~
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O, n return the favor on me VS Biggz
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