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Last edited by Aargh Kelly; February 1st, 2010 at 01:25 AM
A nice poem dude. Its quite simple but effective.
Made me think alot...about what it is your trying to convey. basically if im right, you have the dream ideal and need of who you want to love, and so desperatly want to find it. its nice...vocab was at a steady level and the was good.
Some parts reminded me of a poem i wrote 'Memories Mist', check it in my signiture.
Nice drop mate.
sNoopfox
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