Higher Power Of The Gun "Presented by The Reinvention"

[TheReinvention]

Higher power by the hour everyone bein a coward..
Liars are sour, and these monsters devour..
everything in your path u stick out like a tower..
They gun you down, look there everywhere around..
They all want you dead the smile turns upside down..
Fall to your knees hoping you can make it down town..
without getting shot into snot by a bullet in the head..
Cause once that shot hits right, your bound to be dead..
So Instead ya grab your rifle like your a gunman disciple..
Charge down the street you lost your life! no!..
They gunned ya like mad pyschos...
Ya know how ya survive, thats how the fight goes..
No longer exists in the midst on the earth..
Your soul persists into eternity where you'll have a rebirth..


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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post1996807

[TheReinvention]

Yo, Im uppin for some replies.. it will all be appreciated.. thanks yall.

[Novacain]

Ive not read anything else from you, but i notice your post count is high so im just goin from my initial views on this...

This wasn't the greatest piece, but its better than most of what Ive been reading lately, there were a few downers like rhyming shot twice, and shot with snot. Its like you wanted it to flow, but you wer pushing it.

Like i said, you're probly already established as an OM artist here, but what I see in this piece is potential, and plenty of it.

Keep droppin man

[TheReinvention]

Uppin for some more feed guys..

[warchild]

i thought this verse was average there was one or two decent lines but that was it, the structure was good but the flow was average, overall an average verse.