Smokajoka vs. Jacent: Season two championship
You guys have two weeks, till the Friday after this upcoming Friday. Verses are due at 11:59 PM eastern time, no later. Agree on the line limit, hopefully between 10-30 but whatever yall decide. Don't freepost in this thread you will be banned.
ChuckTs35 [2:34 PM]: how many lines you wanna go?
SmokaJoka666 [2:34 PM]: it's championship...let's go 30
ChuckTs35 [2:34 PM]: Aight
ChuckTs35 [2:35 PM]: stay nekkid
SmokaJoka666 [2:35 PM]: always for you baby
fa sho
Check....
Tired of waiting...die
Dear Jacent/Dom P/Guy Who Feeds/Guy With Fake Personals/Guy Who Dates Other Guys,
RCN likes ya...fuck they'll be half the voters on ya dick, right?
When it came to RB?
Jace. is a fuckin pissant...cuz we've yet to see ya shitfly
Jacent winnin?? what kinda verses does LLL believe in?
Faggot left early cuz he woulda lost the rest of the season
Now it's over son...and Jace can taste defeat instead..
Cuz if I wanted some shit from you...I'd squeeze your head
Ironic how you say everyone loves ya lines and bars then...
I guess so you could catch up...Oz restarted records at RM??
Drop those wackass personals...cuz I'll leave ya Postmortem
When I cut you up, and play at ya funeral with ya body organs
..I know I aint Vylint...but Jace...dont show remorse
Cuz I'll worship the ground....that awaits ya fuckin corpse
You blow at RM, RCN's gone..damn ya e-careers plunderin..
But dont beat yaself up over this loss....I plan to bury you under it
Then beat ya ass in the outskirts of ya town if I chose...
Fag'll take it literally...and take off the bottom half of his clothes
...This bitch actually thinks his fists are lethal weapons..
The sad thing is....his breath is considered equally reckoned
Dont even trip on personals...ya girl's got that angle, shit..
I gotta give it to ya...the bitch's got the face of an angel....fish
First he left RB for a GUY...then ya verses lines are played..
But with so much Vylint's in the world...
At least it isnt hard for Jace. to find a date..
Son, I'll make ya spotlight in LLL so dim...this wack kid..
Would go to his fuckin night school and be counted absent
You'd catch laughter if you ever dropped any audios...
Retire as a musician?? No.....Im just sayin you'll decompose
Try and diss my race....but ya bitch is more of a complexion..
She's like a brick...dirty..flat on both sides and laid by Mexicans
Wack bitch...Im shocked how kats like ya weak lines..
But out of 4 battles..
Do they fucking know that you've lost to me THREE times..
And fuck it if Im Mexican....bitch it's always been known...
Jace stays homesick, but honestly...we're sick of ya holmes..
Fucker...32
Note - For the sake of retards who search the web for days at the time to try to find lines that resemble one another...I took one out, vote against me if you want...dont care honestly...I made it further than anyone else in LLL this season (besides Jacent) with no accusations this season, so dont read my fucking verse and think I REALLY took a line...you might as well be voting for Jacent, nuff said.
Last edited by SmokaJoka; January 26th, 2005 at 12:48 PM Reason: Took Out A Line To Keep Away Drama
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this is fact son, i'ma just leave you deadthis is all stupid.
battling isn't about accusations, it's about insults. fags.
& you know its bad when
i got Emerge clowning you, & HE'S AN AUDIO HEAD
your fake death was gay, but this time we'll let shit slide
cuz when we read your verses, we just wished you really did die
& i wont get started on ya accolades, but it hit me
when ya take so much pride, in a league thats so fuckin shitty
you was aight at best, but i hate that it had to be like this
cause i'd give u a thumbs up, but you'd prolly bite it
but new kids look up to smoka, but damn its a long year
cause most of us vets were askin how the fuck you got here
this shits serious, i'm quick to have your ass missin
& i stay in the hood, like engines & transmissions
RCN wasn't wack, it was dope but it got kids fightin
& its sad, that kid was the only one from rb, NOT to get invited
not afraid to diss ya disease, but duke's fumbling this gig
& i've struggled this season, while he's just struggling to live
i hate to boast, but i'm not the one to be fighting fags
& you not the worst, but you should just stick to writing mags
played lines, bitten shit, happens to be smoka's marquee
i mean c'mon, HE TRIED TO COVER UP BITING FROM RV
i'ma be taking an award because I'm tight n' shit
but dont worry smoka cuz i'm sure...
theres some kind of award for repeatedly getting away with biting, bitch!
I'm here to hurt gays, & its not funny what i made her say
when i told ya girl she got halibut,
i wasn't talkin 'bout feeble minded's wordplay
you rose to the occasion, now you gotta battle this
but smoka's only known, for falling off quicker than shadows did
scared to post a pic, ya face is gross than most stuff
& your shits the ugliest, since napoleon dynamite learned to post up
its time man, & like post this is where it gets fun
cause i aint have closing lines, so look, i went and bit some
don't believe the hype kidsOriginally Posted by A Homosexual
Last edited by JACE; January 26th, 2005 at 10:39 PM
Jacent winnin?? what kinda verses does LLL believe in?
Faggot left early cuz he woulda lost the rest of the season
..I know I aint Vylint...but Jace...dont show remorse
Cuz I'll worship the ground....that awaits ya fuckin corpse
You blow at RM, RCN's gone..damn ya e-careers plunderin..
But dont beat yaself up over this loss....I plan to bury you under it
Dont even trip on personals...ya girl's got that angle, shit..
I gotta give it to ya...the bitch's got the face of an angel....fish
First he left RB for a GUY...then ya verses lines are played..
But with so much Vylint's in the world...
At least it isnt hard for Jace. to find a date..
Wack bitch...Im shocked how kats like ya weak lines..
But out of 4 battles..
Do they fucking know that you've lost to me THREE times..
some pretty good personals, some cool flips and nice punchs for the most...i personally read it before u editted but cant rememebr the line u removed for some reason....ion kno if u bit or not, not my problem..too many concepts out there, its likely it was just thought up, so thas how imma take it, why bite for the title?
props for makin it this far man.
vs
this is fact son, i'ma just leave you dead
& you know its bad when
i got Emerge clowning you, & HE'S AN AUDIO HEAD
your fake death was gay, but this time we'll let shit slide
cuz when we read your verses, we just wished you really did die
you was aight at best, but i hate that it had to be like this
cause i'd give u a thumbs up, but you'd prolly bite it
RCN wasn't wack, it was dope but it got kids fightin
& its sad, that kid was the only one from rb, NOT to get invited
not afraid to diss ya disease, but duke's fumbling this gig
& i've struggled this season, while he's just struggling to live
i'ma be taking an award because I'm tight n' shit
but dont worry smoka cuz i'm sure...
theres some kind of award for repeatedly getting away with biting, bitch!
I'm here to hurt gays, & its not funny what i made her say
when i told ya girl she got halibut,
i wasn't talkin 'bout feeble minded's wordplay
you rose to the occasion, now you gotta battle this
but smoka's only known, for falling off quicker than shadows did
nice personals, flow was cool throughout, the feeble minded line was the line of the battle on my behalf
shit was just witty as fuck, and had me laughin for a min. personals were harsh. cool verse jace
aiight........as a whole......jacent got too repetitive with the fuckin bitin personals....i think maybe 1 or 2 were cool as far as creativity and just being kinda funny, he went overboard and it cut the quality of his verse, post on the other hand had some strong lines, but then he countered with weak lines...and then shit thats been deaded already like the rbl line....everybodies been makin that line...i made like 3 my damn self, shits just a bit played now....so that along with a few others was just short of exceptional....not bad, cuz ya good lines were pretty good...then some iight joints and then the ones that kinda made me laugh like the ones i quoted above...jacent besides the couple boring personals i seen, u had a few other lines i just was like" whyd he say that shit", like the closer....still.....i went through both verses and quoted the standouts in my view and i got jace barely coming out with more lines i laughed and said ooh at.....close shit..i liked this
vote- jacent......props to both makin it this far......
.Dohpe.
.Been There-Sonned Cats.
Jacent winnin?? what kinda verses does LLL believe in?
Faggot left early cuz he woulda lost the rest of the season
Now it's over son...and Jace can taste defeat instead..
Cuz if I wanted some shit from you...I'd squeeze your head
...This bitch actually thinks his fists are lethal weapons..
The sad thing is....his breath is considered equally reckoned
Dont even trip on personals...ya girl's got that angle, shit..
I gotta give it to ya...the bitch's got the face of an angel....fish
First he left RB for a GUY...then ya verses lines are played..
But with so much Vylint's in the world...
At least it isnt hard for Jace. to find a date..
Wack bitch...Im shocked how kats like ya weak lines..
But out of 4 battles..
Do they fucking know that you've lost to me THREE times..
vs
this is fact son, i'ma just leave you dead
& you know its bad when
i got Emerge clowning you, & HE'S AN AUDIO HEAD
you was aight at best, but i hate that it had to be like this
cause i'd give u a thumbs up, but you'd prolly bite it
RCN wasn't wack, it was dope but it got kids fightin
& its sad, that kid was the only one from rb, NOT to get invited
i hate to boast, but i'm not the one to be fighting fags
& you not the worst, but you should just stick to writing mags
played lines, bitten shit, happens to be smoka's marquee
i mean c'mon, HE TRIED TO COVER UP BITING FROM RV
I'm here to hurt gays, & its not funny what i made her say
when i told ya girl she got halibut,
i wasn't talkin 'bout feeble minded's wordplay
you rose to the occasion, now you gotta battle this
but smoka's only known, for falling off quicker than shadows did
scared to post a pic, ya face is gross than most stuff
& your shits the ugliest, since napoleon dynamite learned to post up
its time man, & like post this is where it gets fun
cause i aint have closing lines, so look, i went and bit some
V/ Jacent, pretty easily
All good....whatever
Last edited by SmokaJoka; January 26th, 2005 at 11:24 PM
Smoka had 1 bar that wasn't wack.
Jacent merked him easily.
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Battles like these.. they get too repetitive.
Smoka kept on saying about how we wanna see Jacent die...
Enough is enough after a while.
Jacent did the same thing with biting personals...
That being said, Jacent seemed to just come to this battle with more...
And that simply took him the win.
He had more personals, more ammo, whateva you wanna call it.
Oh, my bad, so good but LONG battle. It wasn't that big of a merk either, I thought they were actually kinda close.
Vote: Jacent
close battle... great for pre-season.. decent for season... not very good for the finaland on to smoka coz I like him a lot.. so he'll know this is an honest vote..... you really need to............ elevate... I mean.. this is the FINAL.... when I first came on here , the finals were some dope shit... Evolve vs Cam Evolve vs Avalon Mindtheory vs Avalon.. ... your verse just really wasnt upto scratch... I'm sorry to say this .but I really didnt like any of it.... you need better concepts ....better wording and more aggression.....
Jacent... I've always seen you as one the top verser's built on your reputation from RM (but I've never seen you as a title contender).... you've backed up your talk in LLL but until now, I've never seen you go a whole season to see what you could do without signing out again... you've done well to get this far but I think you must have dried up a bit.. coz nearly all of your verse were disses on Smoka's current situation.. fair enough its too good to miss and I would have dropped a punch or too about it... but you seemed to NEED to mention it, to ensure you had enough lines.
basically a very dissapointing finals..
and for jacent.. not up to his OR final material but enough to beat smoka... WITH the now infamous line being treat as his own....so vote - Jacent
Last edited by Erupt; January 27th, 2005 at 01:36 PM
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To go ahead and let it be known....
^Those are bitten...I'll find the links in just a minute
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
Wtf?...
LOL.
Im Going to doubt that.
Only because I was on Aim with jace when he Key'd the verse.
BUT egh. If u say so.
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
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