Small nigga Big nigga

[Omniscient]

Small nigga aint got no connects so he stays broke
Small nigga’s lifes fucked up so he sells the coke
Small nigga’s on da street being a menace to society
Small nigga drinks whatever he don’t know about refinery
Small nigga hustles by himself he has no one to trust
Small nigga’s jumping every time he hears a gun bust
Small nigga’s alone in the world he has no family and friends
Small nigga’s the only one still mesmerized over a benz
Small nigga don’t know how to cook crack so he steals it
Small nigga’s the one who says he buys dope cus he needs it
Small nigga aint got no pride so he lets big niggaz pick on him
Small nigga plays the game but his morale is not to win


Big nigga knows everybody they say he runs the streets
Big nigga is the one small niggaz go to ta get strapped wit heat
Big nigga’s got money so he hires himself a bodyguard
Big nigga’s got a basketball court plus a pool in his backyard
Big nigga is da boss he tells u who could hustle on his block
Big nigga is the one u give a cut to after u sell ya rock
Big nigga holds it down even though he don’t do no shootin
Big nigga’s the one in the back just doing all da recruitin
Big nigga’s dressed to impress he wears da latest fashion
Big nigga use to live in a apartment now he owns a mansion
Big nigga makes it a hobby to pick on the small nigga
But big nigga never knew the small nigga had heart to pull da trigga


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[conquistador]

I don't wanna say it sucks because none of us started out good but it just seems like you have zero creativity and don't really give a fuck about imagery...you just adlibbed a cat in the hat rhyme and I'm being nice...most rb members would fucking chew you up man.

[Da Professor]

Alright man This wasn't bad, but it wasn't so hot either! One thing u got to work on is the repetitiveness of your rhymes, SMALL NIGGA and BIG NIGGA used to much I understand it was your point, but it kinda bored me, but remmeber I am a noob, so maybe my opinion doesn't matter to u, but good job anyways !! KEEP DROPPIN'!! Much Love Dogg!! Peace!!

[Omniscient]

I know it weren't that good but i just wanted to get sumthin off my head about small and big time niggaz on my streets so i could understand if i get chewed up on this post it really doesn't matter to me it was just a freestyle i wrote

[Kill.]

eh all i got to say man is that was just to simple.......be more creative about it......work on that idea......it has potential to be a pretty good drop but it needs creativity........stay up though man.....not your best drop at all.......

[Kill.]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...5&page=1&pp=15
hit this up^^^^^^^^

[GhettoFabolous]

This wasnt too badd, cept da "Small nigga" "Big Nigga" got madd repetitive tho i do c what u was tryna do. The end was dope, if u wanna u could take this piece further, redo it witout the small/big nigga startin erry sentence and make this madd dope. Nice drop tho, jus a repetitive.

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[Mistral]

It was alright...It kinda reminded me of a nursery rhyme in a way...But it was ok though...Kinda got repetative.....Probably could have dropped the beginnings of the verses and only said them a few times instead of every line and it would have worked out well too but either way it works....The end was pretty nice though, nice little ending, i got what you were saying from the piece...But overall this was alright...Keep At It.

[XeNtR!K]

I know it weren't that good but i just wanted to get sumthin off my head about small and big time niggaz on my streets so i could understand if i get chewed up on this post it really doesn't matter to me it was just a freestyle i wrote

a freestyle? word.

[Omniscient]

thanks 4 the feed

[F.A.M.]

ok on the real that rhyme over a killa beat could get it crunk down in the south,,,but written down its like a repetitive statement thats not really excitin becuz of the lack of vocab , u feel me, but it wasnt just fuked off i read alotta ya posts u str8 up wit the block talk-thats ya style but be a lil more unique wit it....aight

[Omniscient]

Cool F.A.M thanks 4 the feed