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  1. #1
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    i cant

    i cant let what you do destroy me take over me..
    i cant let the pain fry my brain having me going insane to the point that i cant remain...
    real.. real to myself to you or i but fuck it only the strong survive..
    i cant let you make me feel selfless, hopeless, lifeless leaving me breathless.. having to gasp for air with all the fog of misery leaving me in despair..

    i cant let you destroy what i amounted to be , the queen the righteous one.. the one that stayed strong through all the beatings,,no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..

    i cant let you take me down under where there is no sunshine but your yells and anger that roar like thunder..


    i cant let you take the best of me.. i cant and wont let you kill me..

  2. #2
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    uppin ^^^

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    Tight ish gurl ...
    sorrry bout the sleepers!!

    Much props

    pz xXx DiMe
    ~1~

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    -First Lady of RB- DaGyrlRemarqabL's Avatar
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    Re: i cant

    Originally posted by star
    no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..
    That line was SoO-sO good Ma..Really summed up the vibe of the whole verse..You just pop up when im least expectin it...its good to see ya back gyrl...you have definately elevated since last i read from you..This verse was mad nice..Ive always been feelin ya shit..im lookin forward to seein more from ya ma....stay up n stick around..
    peace.
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    wrd crazy sleepers....

    thanks for tha love yall...

    uno

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    pure strong emotions...structure was a bit off...but still came very raw....very powerful....i felt it for sure...nice to see you're 'moving on'...stay strong...keep yo head up...(sorry if i sound patronising)...respect....
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    You've Earned a Custom Title! Kstroyer's Avatar
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    this was deep as whoa!! i like the use of "i cant" nice flow!

    deepish on the real!

    holla atcha boi!

    and check out some of my drops!

  8. #8
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    no doubt..luv thanks for da points...

    respect

    uno

  9. #9
    papiswifey
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    i was feelin dis. i like da internal rhyme. ur styles a bit different from most i seen and i like it. keep it up. one

  10. #10
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    no doubt ma,,

    much respect
    uno

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    Yo stay righteous. Stay true sis. Keep God first. Only love.

    Much love and God Bless you..

  12. #12
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    wrd up ^^

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