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no hate, crew, or d/r votes
No recycling feeding or biting...
Verses due by midnight 2mrw...GMT time
those are the rules check in and we'll start....
mc heartless
Def by mouf
10-16 lines...
no hate, crew, or d/r votes
No recycling feeding or biting...
Verses due by midnight 2mrw...GMT time
those are the rules check in and we'll start....
Battles:
Come and get it.
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checkity check......... good luck
yea u 2....checkity check check son..............................
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Come and get it.
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Now that you've left outta Kritikal you should just stop rappin
Its not cuz of what happened its the fact that ur skill is wackened
I'ma give you your own option and let you step to the gun
So on the contrare.....it is you that will be gettin sonned
This kid is horrible truly we all know hes wack and overrated
Cuz this is the same kid who managed to get served by Gold plated
This kids won't back down but he always battles newbs
And even then his talents so bad he still manages to lose
I mean lets be serious...u lost to MC Merc and the guys 3-8
U managed to lose to him? your whole existence must be a mistake
Now i'm startin to think that your wackness defined...seriously....
Cuz ur the ONLY person to ever be beaten by the SupaEmcee
And as a closing note no hard feelings but you started all this mess
So when I rip your cardiac organs outta your chest this mc'll truly be....
.................................................. .......................heartless
most punches came from his other battles which are linked so that means the others came from his profile...so don't be changin it or nothin
Battles:
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HOE k.....
talkin shit bout how you are the leader gettin groupies....bitch hush...
gettin a blowjob?...nah your cleanin your dick with your mr.spits toothbrush...
NEWSFLASH...call charges are measured by the size of your dick see...
so from now on, Orange said your on a new tarriff... all your calls are free ...
thinks its "fine" to park in a "fine for parking here" spot in his car...
girl says "no strings attached"...dumbass thinks hes buyin a bust guitar...
dropping dope verse never hurt no-one...but he refuses to take the risk...
army fired a 21gun slaute when you were born...to bad they missed...
your sanity cells are like runaway kids...shit you mustve lost em...
your crew "sticks together"...maybe ya'll should wash more often...
so if you cant laugh at yourself il do it for you for a fee...
shit...he just died...kick him if you dont believe me...
so me whorin you is as easy as satan committin sins...
your skills are in your dreams...go to sleep and you'll win...
word
good battle def.......
right, fuck the analysis, it goes like this
def by mouf - pretty safe drop, but the structure was jus a little too incoherent so on the punchlines you lost punchin power.
mc heartless - pretty good aswell, i'm givin you my vote but you only jus got it with the last line
good battle tho' - i enjoyd the read
peace - sefton
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165166
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uppin 1#.............safe for the feed.............lets get some more votes in.......
werd on that last line nice... thought this battle was iight both could of came better but still none the less was a good battle to read got kinda board with def's verse and got tired so thats why im gonna go with MC that last line was good not bad at all
when feeble unbans me ill poll this
V. MC
link http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165090
I know... sorta sad really... much of the elevation of today's best was due to Jr... I think getting rid of it is a bad idea... but what is happening, is a few good heads are going around saying RB is wack, and it sent the site reeling... lmao$pitacular
just cuz some wack fucks hatin all the sudden RB's wack... the 'Legends" aren't what they were once... so now text "sucks" on RB... lmao it's just a phase. It'll go away soon, changes or not. I been lookin at other sites, other cats, and the top battles... WACK. so Idk what the hype is.
^ werd
Originally posted byef by Mouf
Now that you've left outta Kritikal you should just stop rappin
Its not cuz of what happened its the fact that ur skill is wackened
^^OK PERSONAL
I'ma give you your own option and let you step to the gun
So on the contrare.....it is you that will be gettin sonned
^^NO REAL PUNCH AND VERY WEAK ON THE PERSONAL NEVER PUT LINKS IN YOUR SPIT I'VE LEARNED THAT THE HARD WAY
This kid is horrible truly we all know hes wack and overrated
Cuz this is the same kid who managed to get served by Gold plated
^^OK PERSONAL
This kids won't back down but he always battles newbs
And even then his talents so bad he still manages to lose
^^NO REAL PUNCH OR PERSONAL
I mean lets be serious...u lost to MC Merc and the guys 3-8
U managed to lose to him? your whole existence must be a mistake
^^MEH ON THE PERSONAL IT'S LIKE YOU WERE RUNNING OUT OF THINGS TO SAY TO HIM
Now i'm startin to think that your wackness defined...seriously....
Cuz ur the ONLY person to ever be beaten by the SupaEmcee
^^HERE GOES ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE MEH ON THE PERSONAL
And as a closing note no hard feelings but you started all this mess
So when I rip your cardiac organs outta your chest this mc'll truly be....
.................................................. .......................heartless
^^THIS IS REALLY YOUR BEST BAR A GOOD USAGE ON THE NAMEPLAY
elevate pz......makin your spit look all pretty with your structure doesn't win battles pz....
Originally posted by:Mc Heartless
talkin shit bout how you are the leader gettin groupies....bitch hush...
gettin a blowjob?...nah your cleanin your dick with your mr.spits toothbrush...
^^I DON'T KNOW BUT THIS WAS WORDED BADLY...OK ON THE PERSONAL THOUGH
NEWSFLASH...call charges are measured by the size of your dick see...
so from now on, Orange said your on a new tarriff... all your calls are free ...
^^MEH
thinks its "fine" to park in a "fine for parking here" spot in his car...
girl says "no strings attached"...dumbass thinks hes buyin a bust guitar...
^^WEAK PUNCH
dropping dope verse never hurt no-one...but he refuses to take the risk...
army fired a 21gun slaute when you were born...to bad they missed...
^^NOTHING REALLY EXCITING
your sanity cells are like runaway kids...shit you mustve lost em...
your crew "sticks together"...maybe ya'll should wash more often...
^^OK PERSONAL
so if you cant laugh at yourself il do it for you for a fee...
shit...he just died...kick him if you dont believe me...
^^1ST LINE NOPE....2ND LINE OK
so me whorin you is as easy as satan committin sins...
your skills are in your dreams...go to sleep and you'll win...
^^NICE CLOSER BUT NOT BETTER THEN DEF'S HE CAME BETTER ON THE CLOSER
I'm gonna have to say my vote goes to Mc Heartless on this one..cause he had way more establishing personals on this one compared to Def's weak personals then again Mc had some meh punches in his spit and Def really didn't have any so there for MC takes this....V/Mc Heartless
pz....
AIGHT
def-u came out aight,the whole verse was basicly repeatin how wack a emcee he was a namin the people he lost against which is aight...needed more complexity ya feel me i liked the structure tho..that was nice...some diversity a punches..
mc-came cool some of ya punches i had to reread but you was goin 95 at him i liked the no strings attached stunt lol that was funny overall u was more creativity and attempted to swing even tho some didnt hit
over i give it to mc for havin punches and bein more creative wit the flow
v-mc
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alright well def had some pretty decent punches liked the gold plated line and u came with a hott closer
mc thought u came with better punches in this one ok opener.. 21 gun salute was kinda played but i think ur closer won it for u in my eyes
dont have 100 votes cant poll...would go to mc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=164292
uppin 2 #.........................
Uppin 3 #.............................
this was a good battle, both are at the same skill level,
def, had some decent punches, and a few personals... the flow was a lil sloppy, you needed to be more creative
mc heartless, you had better punches, you flow was a lil sloppy too, you came harder and had more creativity
Vote/ MC heartless
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