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July 9th, 2002, 09:51 AM
#1
The one
I remember her specifically, especially this one time
because she looked so beautiful under that sunshine
thought maybe my luck would change, but love is blind
she got taken away...faded to grey, and I'm unsigned
I tuck my shirt in, I hope to meet someone like her
what makes me think I could keep someone like her?
hell I probably couldnt even speak to someone like her
thats what makes it hard to even leave someone like her
what hurts me the most is thinkin that she dont remember me
if what was a moment in her life, to me was a century
I wanna be the one for her, but you cant make an entrance
when the consequence could lead to shit that could break a friendship
I got pictures, notes, smiles and dreams
to remember the moment when I was happy
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July 9th, 2002, 12:03 PM
#2
got your point across really well, i can think of times when ive felt like this u can really relate to this.. nice work
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July 9th, 2002, 02:01 PM
#3
Aww this was a sweet piece
hope meet some one like her
ne wayz nice peace clearly understood
much respect
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July 11th, 2002, 10:20 AM
#4
This was real sweet,
much props ...
Try and put bars in ur work,
flows better!
Pz xXx DiMe
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