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  1. #1
    Strenuous
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    The one

    I remember her specifically, especially this one time
    because she looked so beautiful under that sunshine
    thought maybe my luck would change, but love is blind
    she got taken away...faded to grey, and I'm unsigned
    I tuck my shirt in, I hope to meet someone like her
    what makes me think I could keep someone like her?
    hell I probably couldnt even speak to someone like her
    thats what makes it hard to even leave someone like her
    what hurts me the most is thinkin that she dont remember me
    if what was a moment in her life, to me was a century
    I wanna be the one for her, but you cant make an entrance
    when the consequence could lead to shit that could break a friendship
    I got pictures, notes, smiles and dreams
    to remember the moment when I was happy

  2. #2
    danja
    Guest
    got your point across really well, i can think of times when ive felt like this u can really relate to this.. nice work

  3. #3
    the illestchic
    Guest
    Aww this was a sweet piece
    hope meet some one like her
    ne wayz nice peace clearly understood

    much respect

  4. #4
    [*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ]
    Guest
    This was real sweet,
    much props ...
    Try and put bars in ur work,
    flows better!

    Pz xXx DiMe
    ~1~

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