Introduction of Myself

[Stealth Assassin]

stealth assassin
labelled a cold blood killer
im like scream 3
an action pack triller

im like a couple of asprins
i came to ease pain
like pumping morphine
straight into your vain

sick style i maintain
inside my mainframe
i maintain the same fame
with the same name

i flow like blood
threw your main auteries
you cant start the car
without the starter keys

i speak in dialect
unknown to imposters
my intention is to
make rocafella rosters

you know i got a dream
thats what drives me to the limit
instead of freestyling
i make you the mimic

living in the hood
make me learn to strech crack
the hood gone be unhappy
when they hear stealth back

i could make my solo
sound like a duo
im dressed to impress
like girls learning judo

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[Stealth Assassin]

i just joint here , give me a atleast a day to get 2 decent feedback on open mics

[horseman]

impressive bruv i think u got good rhyming skills.

[commonground]

you structure need work man easily try and keep it on one line

eg(stealth assassin labelled a cold blood killer
im like scream 3 an action pack triller)

scheme was a bit basic (fame, name. killer, thriller. etc etc) work on that..
flow was iight but nothing specail really stood out to me...but if that was your first time yer that wasnt to bad keep up and work on structure and trying to keep it complex before moving into multis and shit......but stay up man most importantly

one

if you could drop some feed on my new om keying would be much appreciated

[CrazyCarl]

You had some good ideas. Work on structure, those sets of four should be two lines. Keep writing and postin and you'll get better thinking of original topics.
Check out "Why you Hatin"