pyromaniac vs. bLaKgUy

[bLaKgUy]

10 lines house rules it dont matter who goes first i will spit in like 5mins i expect your shit soon

[bLaKgUy]

this kat gots the brain of an elf
when he reads my flows he performs gratification to oneself
this kats white as fuck the rappin will ferrel
the only difference is he's broke as fuck and his names derrel
im quick to put out your fire i destroy pyromaniacs
laid back attack with water to soak up what you lack
quick to open up the backdoor ur a hardcore ass whore
name one hott rapper thats outta baltimore
ima whip my dick out and let out a quick splatter
dont for get people "your VOTE matters"

haha quick key lunch is over gotta get to class

[bLaKgUy]

i expect your shit soon

[Rudy Ray Moore]

Terror fright horror panic goddamn it I put all types of fear in ya heart/

why? cause ya punch lines frail flaccid and meek or would u understand it better if I said they simply weak/

you incapable of throwing a punch that ain’t incompetent/ so when I say u verse sucked its still a compliment/

in bitch slapped u seemed to exude confidence but ya rhymes inferior like a passant compared to the head of da parliament/

u talk hard but u really more pussy then kittens, nigga I can smell ur sent/ who u trying to fool u far form a malcontent/

u ain’t tuff u false and fraudulent...a counterfeit like all the false profits before Jesus was sent/

the only reason blackguy in the street is cause his pops couldn’t pay rent

[Rudy Ray Moore]

can some one please vote on this i will return the vote (honestly of course) just leave a link

[avoid regret]

pyro, had way betta punches..... both were good however pyro held it down and my vote goes to u

[bLaKgUy]

like i said it was a quick key i didnt read it b4 i submitted it so here is a quick correction

this kat gots the brain of an elf
when he reads my flows he performs gratification to oneself
this kats white as fuck the rappin Will Ferrel
the only difference is he's broke as fuck and his real names derrel
im quick to put out your fire i destroy pyromaniacs
laid back attack with water to soak up what you lack
quick to open up the backdoor ur a hardcore ass whore
name one hott rapper thats come outta baltimore
ima whip my dick out and let out a quick splatter
dont for get people "your VOTE matters"

hit it up with a vote

[Assazin]

Originally posted by:Blakguy
this kat gots the brain of an elf
when he reads my flows he performs gratification to oneself
^^THIS WAS A WEAK OPENER NO REAL PUNCH AT ALL
this kats white as fuck the rappin Will Ferrel
the only difference is he's broke as fuck and his real names derrel
^^MEH ON THE PERSONAL
im quick to put out your fire i destroy pyromaniacs
laid back attack with water to soak up what you lack
^^THIS WHOLE BAR WAS S.G. AND THAT DOESN'T WIN BATTLES
quick to open up the backdoor ur a hardcore ass whore
name one hott rapper thats come outta baltimore
^^NO REAL PUNCH ON THIS BAR
ima whip my dick out and let out a quick splatter
dont for get people "your VOTE matters"
^^WEAK ENDING

you need to elevate on everything you had no real punches when you were spitting...you structure was normal....you had an attempt at a personal just keep elevating and you'll get the hang of it pz...

Originally posted by:Pyro
Terror fright horror panic goddamn it I put all types of fear in ya heart/
^^THIS WAS A SOLO LINER BUT FOR SOME REASON I LIKED IT
why? cause ya punch lines frail flaccid and meek or would u understand it better if I said they simply weak/
^^DIDN'T REALLY LIKE THIS BAR
you incapable of throwing a punch that ain’t incompetent/ so when I say u verse sucked its still a compliment/
^^MEH ON THE DISS
in bitch slapped u seemed to exude confidence but ya rhymes inferior like a passant compared to the head of da parliament/
^^NOPE WASN'T FEELING THIS EITHER
u talk hard but u really more pussy then kittens, nigga I can smell ur sent/ who u trying to fool u far form a malcontent/
^^THIS WAS A PLAYED LINE
u ain’t tuff u false and fraudulent...a counterfeit like all the false profits before Jesus was sent/
^^PROBLY YA BEST LINE OF YA WHOLE SPIT
the only reason blackguy in the street is cause his pops couldn’t pay rent
^^NOPE WEAK ENDING NO ONE'S GONNA FEEL THAT

you had some aight wordplay and punches but fuckin come on your
fuckin structure was fuckin shit...that is the ugliest shit I've ever seen
a little tip never use that bullshit ass structure ever again in your lifetime of rapping cuz it's plain and simple garbage.....other then that you killed this kat though pz.....

V/Pyro
for comin less wacker wit punches and meh wordplay

hit one of the links back wit an honest vote aight then pz.....

[bLaKgUy]

so there's no confusion heres some explanations
kats name is derrel/ will ferrel the movie elf GET IT????
in his profile no occupation just says "workin"
dude's from baltimore
in his sig "YOUR VOTE MATTERS" lol
just to clarify my shit the structure lol

[Darky Da Prophet]

bLaKgUy im afraid u lost some lines were funny like the derrel line and saying hes white. some lines were weak and some were ok.
Pyromaniac learn to spell PROPHET or ill shit on u. Your lines were a bit better and more sounding better of the way i rapped it in my head (is this a review? YES STFU)
now there wasnt no punchlines at all from both of you so that sucks.
Vote Pyromaniac

[bLaKgUy]

uppin...............uppin..................uppin.. ...

[F.A.M.]

hm different opinion

blak i liked your verse i never peep u before or whatever i liked the gratification with hiself then u had called him a elf then was like will ferrel a lil wordplay whatever i liked the diss bout hot rappers comin outta baltimore..it was short a semi sweet

pyro one..ya flow cool but the bars just so long bout time i get to the end i forgot what u talkin about u know,,i was feelin it no disses that hit hard...to long


no hate tho

v-blak

[Rudy Ray Moore]

sorry if i miss spelled some words i did type it quick to make the deadline and as far as personals go couldn't really diss him for being black me being african american and all

P/S profit was a word play on counterfit o.k PROPHET

[Rudy Ray Moore]

sorry if i miss spelled some words i did type it quick to make the deadline and as far as personals go couldn't really diss him for being black me being african american and all

P/S profit was a word play on counterfit o.k PROPHET

please vote people

[Skrollz]

newb battle..... not bad not bad........ shit was pretty even wat it came down was to this line "u ain’t tuff u false and fraudulent...a counterfeit like all the false profits before Jesus was sent/" that shit was hot n made pyros shit stand out more..... made him get the win.. stay up blakguy no hate homie.... keep elevating... jus keep battlin..... ull get better..... stay up 1

vote - pyro


can yall vote honestly on commonground vs skrollz