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    Laughing weapon

    Laughing weapon

    his sibling says
    how glad she is
    he did good
    getting his parent’s

    Attention.

    her sibling laughs
    at her joke
    that was funny
    and reclaimed her parent’s

    Attention.

    later in the night
    they fight
    for a Toy

    the oppisote coy
    leads to Goodness and Laughter
    the Weapons
    And they hate each other.
    And will kill another

    For it.

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    Don't think i understand it fully. Maybe i dig too deep. What i thought it was about was humanity fighting for God's attention or something. Like fighting cos of beliefs. Tribal warfare.

    A fresh-ish approach to a piece. Seemed to break abruptly in the last stanza. But i can dig that as the effect.
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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