I'm Back... Give Feed Back I'm trying to elevate

[Abi]

Yo, Yo,

I'm back on the scene
mothafucka's u know what that means
fuck with me and i get real mean
i'm like gucci...
i'm expensive and u want me
i pull up to the club with a black mercedes
closin time i leave with 3 ladies
and yo baby mama tryin to save these
kisses i be givin her... and that black coat, fur
i think she just love me... cuz of that money
but fuck it, i'm back and i'm ready
u wanna talk shit, well i hope u can stay steady
with a barral of a nine in yo mouth
wipe them tears off that's nothin to cry about
so yall tell me to elevate... i just got on an escalator
and went up to the third level
and all i found is escalators and navigators
with 22's... spreewheel dawg u know what i choose
pearl white leather interior, tv in tha mothafucking rearview mirror
name in the headrest, 4-15's u know i be bumpin the best
navigation system, dvd player, a platinum grill, chrome spreewheels
that's the way tha playa's play
in stl where u can find may
and fuck u all if u don't like may



--ok leave feedback and vote please.. i'm trying to elevate a little

[UrGay4aMonth!]

no one really cares for that shit here.... indeed.... try to elevate... write about topics... not about yourself... especially like that...

drop some feed on this please

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163971

[Abi]

ok so please give me any feed back come on

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[sefton blake]

no feelin the verse above but ill check out yer battles.....

peace sb

[Young BoE]

Lol, work on your flow. Your flow was really poor in this.

Agree'd - you need to pic topics - UrGay4aMonth