Family

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It's been six years since we've know eachother
you've grown apart of me like we're sister and brother
But even families have their issues
But their always there to hand you tissues
Through time family members pass on
Lately it seems that you have gone
And what does family do when their member die
They become depressed and lay in their bed and cry
I don't know what to say, it feels like I lost my sister
I wish she was here so I could tell her I miss her
Even though faimily passes on there will always come another
And gone or not I will always be.......Your Brother

Tell me what ya think

[Varentao]

It seemed personal. So critique is kind of reserved. It had a simplicity which usually comes with these kinds of pieces. Though at times it got a bit too simple. Went off a bit poetically too. But overall it was 'sweet'. Quaint. I like reading these types of pieces sometimes. Cos they're personal and don't try to be something grand or complex as such.