LightWeight Title Match: Revel (5-1) vs. MetaFourIcal (4-1)

[SmokaJoka]

Rules.
^Read & Good Luck..

Check In By Wednesday Midnight Eastern
Drop By Friday Midnight Eastern
Voting Ends Sunday

[Meta]

Check... 10-14 Good Rev?

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1958786

[Revel]

check...10-14s straight...

i'll be busy later on this week, so i'll prolly drop by tonight

[Aines.ly Harriot]

Word, I'll try to drop tomorrow....

(Back from Banning, So Links Continue Here...)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163744
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1967877
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1968765

[Revel]

The league's been good to me for this long so-
i'll break bread, as soon as i bring heat to this John Dough
how u've gotten this far is astoundin as fuck
cuz honestly u suck, even when u aint down on ya luck
Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
I'm consistent wit this, Rev's known ta' change norms
but u've never reigned, same wit ya head when u try & brainstorm
i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions

did a quick 12...

dont vote if u dont understand anythin...

[Aines.ly Harriot]

If its ok with Rev, i'd like a 24 hour extension...

I've just been too busy with work (still dealing with the christmas overhaul, Im still at work now and will be till 11pm) and i won't be home today till about 11:30. But if its not Ok just gimme the L and Rev the title...

[Revel]

go 'head...it's cool wit me...

[Aines.ly Harriot]

Blah... Fuck Work.... I've been too busy to just get 20 mins to sit and think something through... so heres a quick 10...

Im a Revelation here, Causin Obese amounts of fat Alaties
Fuck Originality, Kid Couldnt be a Revel asian with Crossed Nationalities
Fucka Draws, Ill FurnitUre Contender Hopes... and i dont lie
Cause Like Redundant Business Associates... Ya Ass Shoulda Lost that Tie
Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches
No need to Trial Me, Like Humanitarian aid Im Perfectly Shipped
No If's or Boats about It... You've Perfected The Try L Method, Bitch
Can't Weather Hits, Like Quakeing Victims Your Dead-Wood Guy
Screwed Over Like A Thai Hooker... And Not Just When I Wave Goodbye

[Mr. Key]

The league's been good to me for this long so-
i'll break bread, as soon as i bring heat to this John Dough
clever, but not hard hittin, ok+2
how u've gotten this far is astoundin as fuck
cuz honestly u suck, even when u aint down on ya luck
decent+1
Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
-iiiight wordplay+3, LOL at me lookin up the word conundrum
I'm consistent wit this, Rev's known ta' change norms
but u've never reigned, same wit ya head when u try & brainstorm
naw
i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
decent+1
kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions
ok+2

Revel +9

Im a Revelation here, Causin Obese amounts of fat Alaties
Fuck Originality, Kid Couldnt be a Revel asian with Crossed Nationalities
-ok+2
Fucka Draws, Ill FurnitUre Contender Hopes... and i dont lie
Cause Like Redundant Business Associates... Ya Ass Shoulda Lost that Tie
decent personal, kinda stretched+1
Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches
ok+2
No need to Trial Me, Like Humanitarian aid Im Perfectly Shipped
No If's or Boats about It... You've Perfected The Try L Method, Bitch
iiiight+3
Can't Weather Hits, Like Quakeing Victims Your Dead-Wood Guy
Screwed Over Like A Thai Hooker... And Not Just When I Wave Goodbye
ok+2

Meta+10

All these championship battles are really close, but i guess thats the good thing about it, basically i was disappointed in this battle, no punches i felt were good, or nice, they were all iight ok or decent, Revel usually comes dope, but he didnt come that great in this battle, Meta didnt come that much better, but he had more creativity and wit in his, which edged this battle out for him

Vote Meta, btw, dont u hate when ur battle gets slept on.

[Aines.ly Harriot]

Thanks for the Votes Guys...

Oh Wait, Thanks for the Vote Chew...

[Expo.]

Wasn't really feeling This Title-Match.. Nothing much to say, Nothing much to quote.. But I'll put the Best stuff vs. Best stuff.

-Revel.
Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions

Vs.

-Meta.
Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches
No need to Trial Me, Like Humanitarian aid Im Perfectly Shipped
No If's or Boats about It... You've Perfected The Try L Method, Bitch

That's about it.. Sorry guy's, for the shitty vote.. Just saw you weren't getting any and figured I'd try my luck and Post one.

V/ Revel.

[Cunny Funt]

Revel
The league's been good to me for this long so-
i'll break bread, as soon as i bring heat to this John Dough
Ok
how u've gotten this far is astoundin as fuck
cuz honestly u suck, even when u aint down on ya luck
Ok
Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
Lol
I'm consistent wit this, Rev's known ta' change norms
but u've never reigned, same wit ya head when u try & brainstorm
Ok
i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
Ok
kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions
Ok

MetaFourIcal
Im a Revelation here, Causin Obese amounts of fat Alaties
Fuck Originality, Kid Couldnt be a Revel asian with Crossed Nationalities
Ok
Fucka Draws, Ill FurnitUre Contender Hopes... and i dont lie
Cause Like Redundant Business Associates... Ya Ass Shoulda Lost that Tie
Ok
Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches
Lol
No need to Trial Me, Like Humanitarian aid Im Perfectly Shipped
No If's or Boats about It... You've Perfected The Try L Method, Bitch
Lol
Can't Weather Hits, Like Quakeing Victims Your Dead-Wood Guy
Screwed Over Like A Thai Hooker... And Not Just When I Wave Goodbye
Lol

Nice battle here. I think Meta won this with better punches and it just seemed more original. Revels verse seemed kinda rushed, Meta came good.

Vote - Meta

[buh bye Matty :(]

revel-

The league's been good to me for this long so-
i'll break bread, as soon as i bring heat to this John Dough
- nah

how u've gotten this far is astoundin as fuck
cuz honestly u suck, even when u aint down on ya luck
- nope

Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
- cool

I'm consistent wit this, Rev's known ta' change norms
but u've never reigned, same wit ya head when u try & brainstorm
- nahh

i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
- cool

kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions
- ha

meta-

Im a Revelation here, Causin Obese amounts of fat Alaties
Fuck Originality, Kid Couldnt be a Revel asian with Crossed Nationalities
- nah

Fucka Draws, Ill FurnitUre Contender Hopes... and i dont lie
Cause Like Redundant Business Associates... Ya Ass Shoulda Lost that Tie
- almost

Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches
- lol

No need to Trial Me, Like Humanitarian aid Im Perfectly Shipped
No If's or Boats about It... You've Perfected The Try L Method, Bitch
- forced a little.. decent

Can't Weather Hits, Like Quakeing Victims Your Dead-Wood Guy
Screwed Over Like A Thai Hooker... And Not Just When I Wave Goodbye
- nah


so it was..

Meta? the champ? that's an undelightful conundrum
ya concepts aint been nuisance u joined, s'why u've become one
i'm intellectual, & i'll merk u in the worst way, Brit
& if u wanna outfox me, u'll need a couple first aid kits
kid you're disposed of, left with bumps & contusions
now ya rep'll git stepped on, cuz i'm known ta' jump to conclusions

vs

Sherlock Like a Herb, I'll Inspector Wit Without the Hunches,
And The Only Thing You Took From LLL....... Was $pits Style and Punches


meta tried to force things to work that werent there.. and a few re-wording on his bars mighta made this alot closer.. revel gets this for coming with a stronger verse.

v/ revel

[Brother Blue Collar]

yea meta good battle, revel's verse was good and while i reading it i was like meta ain't going to top but he did

vote meta

[SmokaJoka]

MetaFourIcal wins, closed.

MetaFourIcal (5-1)
Revel (5-2)