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    krazee
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    my temptation...feedbak plz

    temptations to try this new introduction into a diffent elevation
    the pressures feel like blades on the skin starting to measure
    and i know i wont give in to what the mainstream wantin
    im set with my own style to get shit wicked and wild
    rollin out with my own type of happiness to get up on
    i look round at whuts round and its giving me a frown
    thinkin all these used to be homies tried it to get up but now down
    i try to help with whut i can but they just wont let it happen
    so i leave them alone cuz i know whut a basehead wantin
    and it aint a friend but that lil rock boy they feind
    now i try and stay with them threw it all, but i seem to fail
    i tried being sincere but it dont seem to get me there
    they push away like i was offerin them it all over again
    and they had the right mind of knowing what was gon happen
    i try to get physical and beat it to em, but i end up with a bruisin
    it seems like it was morphine and pcp they on, body n emotions all numb
    now im the one feelin like i did it to em cuz i cant help em
    and i got the addiction for needing their destination they got the first time
    to get away from it all together so i can keep it together
    before i start to let it bother me and i end up on the teather
    of the next one starting up with smokin the rock and being like a brother


    let me get sum feedbak on this shit....it means a lot to me bout this peice

    pce

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    I liked the concept, but i had got lost in the flow and rhyme scene


    Keep elevatin, u gotta do better than this

    Step ya game up, just like i need to

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    krazee
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    thnx for the feed...uppin

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    krazee
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    uppin...good or bad dont matta

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