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Thread: Takin Me to Vets Status..."The Serpents Posion"

  1. January 1st, 2005, 04:52 PM #1
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    Takin Me to Vets Status..."The Serpents Posion"

    "The Serpents Posion"



    The father of lies is often disguised off in the flames
    Hot boxin' the pain, coughin' up the god of this age
    A fox in the cage, a blade ..and the fox wants a taste,
    The blood from the blade, black light, gushing rain...
    Rain is red, the moons bleading, needing pain instead
    Passing thoughts fade inteh space - breaking depths
    Armageddon awakes.. Jesus bleeds, an the lake is red
    While memories shatter an past mistakes make a mess
    An space is spread... As yesterday and tehday connect....
    I dream on a fault line, Every thought is a swifted plate
    The moment's shook ...and emotions begins teh shake..
    ..As my councionce breaks, Then falls inteh open books,
    Plauged... Its better to be safe, than a hopeless crook...
    Or the son of the dawn, the light that blazes in night
    Chokin' on words as brain waves are drainin' inside
    Theres black holes in the heart, skulls are in parts
    Chest cavities caving in an rib cages falling apart.....
    Captured by time, reachin' out teh emptiness
    And no life teh live and forced teh live with it
    Insignificant... A figment of a lost imagination...
    Completely forgotten, Youve lost all ammunition.......


    i'm hope'in this shit will elevate me to Vet Status.... Cuz this shit i can do all day......

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  2. January 1st, 2005, 04:56 PM #2
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    dammit man.....this was fire!!!....i loved the whole thing....

    8/10...

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  3. January 1st, 2005, 04:59 PM #3
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    ight....... Uppin........And Tell Me is it Vet Material?
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  4. January 1st, 2005, 05:00 PM #4
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  5. January 1st, 2005, 05:35 PM #5
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    Come On Guys.... Dont Sleep On This......
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  6. January 1st, 2005, 06:05 PM #6
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    that wuz really hood!! u mad real n yo style n structure wuz off da hook!! no lie daz ma word keep at it cuz that shit wuz hot
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  7. January 1st, 2005, 06:22 PM #7
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    Man.... WTF....Come one peoples.......Feedback...............
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  8. January 1st, 2005, 08:53 PM #8
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    stop sleepin on this........
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  9. January 1st, 2005, 08:58 PM #9
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    nice structure... i liekd the flow... only thing missing is making it really emotional...but other than that it was awesome... i liked all the metaphores... keep at it! was some good shit.
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  10. January 1st, 2005, 09:48 PM #10
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    finally ...........uppin................
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  11. January 1st, 2005, 10:24 PM #11
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    damn yo tht was da shit

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    i came i saw ....u kno da rest
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  12. January 1st, 2005, 11:29 PM #12
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  13. January 1st, 2005, 11:31 PM #13
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    your style is sick, your metaphors are good, overall this is a hot rhyme 7/10
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  14. January 1st, 2005, 11:33 PM #14
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    ight still uppin......
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  15. January 2nd, 2005, 12:09 AM #15
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