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Thread: Shedding Light Onto My Shadow

  1. #1
    Frozen Flayme
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    Shedding Light Onto My Shadow

    JUST LIKE A BLAST FROM THE PAST WHAT WAS EXPECTED CAME AT LAST, EXCEPT FOR THE PROBLEM IT HAPPENED WAY TO FAST, A GUN WAS BROUGHT DO TO ANGER AND HATRED, AND FOR MY MISTAKES ITS YOU WHO'S LAYING DEAD, MEMORIES FLASH IN MY HEAD AS I REMEBER WHAT YOU SAID, "please dont go" IS WHAT YOU PLED, AS "everything will be allright" WAS THE COMFORT THAT I FEED, IT WAS A FIGHT WE KNEW WAS COMING BUT MY PRIDE GOT IN THE WAY, AND I THOUGHT THAT IT AS NOTHING LIVING BY MY GUN WAS HOW I'D PAY, WHO KNEW A LIFE THAT MENT SO MUCH WAS THE ONE I COULDN'T SAVE, EVEN IF THE BULLETS CAME FROM HIM IT WAS I WHO TOOK THE BLAME, NOW IN BED IS WHERE I LAY, ALONE, JUST WAITING FOR THE DAY, I HOPE WE'LL MEET UP AT THE GATES, TILL THEN FOREVER YOU'LL BE MY MATE...I LOVE YOU.


    ON A PERSONAL NOTE I LOVED AND ALWAYS WILL BELINDA DECKER 3-25-85 TO 5-18-02
    Last edited by Frozen Flayme; July 8th, 2002 at 09:12 PM

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    Gunz -N- $tackZ
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    YO DAT WAS SERIOUS SON. wait till u read my shyt about suicidal tendencies. keep spitin da real. uno
    21-13-0

    ~~B~~ aka Synickle AKA Str8killa



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    copyright2002 G.S=GUNZ& STACKZ ANY UNAUTHORIZED REPRODUCTION OF THIS MATERIAL WILL BE SUBJECT TO PENALTY UNDER LAW.

  3. #3
    Full Circle
    Guest
    whats up with all the caps?

    this was alright and deep for the fact that its someone you know and it sucks when you take the blame/bullet
    and deal with everything that could happen after especially
    if doing certain things in situations are completely out of your
    character...this flow was okay

  4. #4
    danja
    Guest
    i could see wher u were comin from although not ur best, caps made it hard to read. overall though a good piece keep it cumin

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