Celestial Vs. MC_Quicksand

[MC_Quicksand]

10 lines
house rules (no feedin', no d/r, no crew votes, no bitin')
no time limit, spit whenever son, just gimme a check

g/l

[MC_Quicksand]

check

[Cels]

You can drop first

[MC_Quicksand]

when we lyrically box, I'll leave Celestial "seein' stars",
usin' his allias 'cause he knows he ain't beatin' my bars,
I got him confused 'cause I'm speakin' in different "dialects",
can't "interpret" my flows, excuses for not understandin' it,
calls himself a "cliche killer", so hurry up n commit suicide,
'cause all your shits been "tried", the jury determined you lied,
if you be the "word", then I be the "dictionary",
definin' how you do this, you just an example of my artillery,
if this cat's a mod, then standards on rb are low,
how can he preside over battles, when he ain't got skills to flow,
this is for show, I pimp Celes for this win 'cause he a hoe,
gimme chalk to blow, so when my words "slap" his face y'all know!

that's 12, I know, drop same number if you like...

[Cels]

And theres another win..

I got vets lined up to die, & guess who's here in time
Of course its Quick sand.. being told to leave the line
I aint lying, no one likes this kid, ya got 1 pal at most
Cuz this Mc's a no body like casper the friendly Ghost
Let me toast... ballet is illy & i eat ham for lunch kids
& yea this line is pointless.. like all of Quick's punches
But fuck it, you're to cool for me, and now i see why
He was partying the WHOLE night.. 7 forums up in EI
ya too wack to be with no crew, ya entire flows old
Wit such horrible lines, I never thought they'd go solo

[`Jammin' Jobus]

Celestial came way better with doper punches.

QUicksand came wack like a wackattackalligator.

VOTE/CELESTIAL.

Meh.. *dqs this* Wack ass vote nigga. - Cel

[Cels]

Mc i'm voting for myself then taking it off the polls so i dont have to click that view poll button everytime i want to peep it.. just so you know

Up

[Facts Machine]

when we lyrically box, I'll leave Celestial "seein' stars",
usin' his allias 'cause he knows he ain't beatin' my bars,
sorry i couldnt find the punch in this,just braggin that your better.
I got him confused 'cause I'm speakin' in different "dialects",
can't "interpret" my flows, excuses for not understandin' it,
uneccesary quotation marks and weak punch
calls himself a "cliche killer", so hurry up n commit suicide,
'cause all your shits been "tried", the jury determined you lied,
played but decent
if you be the "word", then I be the "dictionary",
definin' how you do this, you just an example of my artillery,
bad attempt,could have been better on title diss.
if this cat's a mod, then standards on rb are low,
how can he preside over battles, when he ain't got skills to flow,
weak,not witty and played concept
this is for show, I pimp Celes for this win 'cause he a hoe,
gimme chalk to blow, so when my words "slap" his face y'all know!
played concept and weak punch.

I got vets lined up to die, & guess who's here in time
Of course its Quick sand.. being told to leave the line
creative but kind of weak.
I aint lying, no one likes this kid, ya got 1 pal at most
Cuz this Mc's a no body like casper the friendly Ghost
good punch and set up. casper..lol
Let me toast... ballet is illy & i eat ham for lunch kids
& yea this line is pointless.. like all of Quick's punches
it was pointless,weak but creative.
But fuck it, you're to cool for me, and now i see why
He was partying the WHOLE night.. 7 forums up in EI
nice personal,could have been wittier
ya too wack to be with no crew, ya entire flows old
Wit such horrible lines, I never thought they'd go solo
wasnt feelin it that much.

ok cel got this he even had a better structure and flow.

[mywords]

when we lyrically box, I'll leave Celestial "seein' stars",
usin' his allias 'cause he knows he ain't beatin' my bars,
GOOD
I got him confused 'cause I'm speakin' in different "dialects",
can't "interpret" my flows, excuses for not understandin' it,
DIDN'T RHYME.. BUT OK PUNCH
calls himself a "cliche killer", so hurry up n commit suicide,
'cause all your shits been "tried", the jury determined you lied,
IITE
if you be the "word", then I be the "dictionary",
definin' how you do this, you just an example of my artillery,
NO
if this cat's a mod, then standards on rb are low,
how can he preside over battles, when he ain't got skills to flow,
NO
this is for show, I pimp Celes for this win 'cause he a hoe,
gimme chalk to blow, so when my words "slap" his face y'all know!
NO
7/10


I got vets lined up to die, & guess who's here in time
Of course its Quick sand.. being told to leave the line
NICE
I aint lying, no one likes this kid, ya got 1 pal at most
Cuz this Mc's a no body like casper the friendly Ghost
NICE
Let me toast... ballet is illy & i eat ham for lunch kids
& yea this line is pointless.. like all of Quick's punches
OK..
But fuck it, you're to cool for me, and now i see why
He was partying the WHOLE night.. 7 forums up in EI
GOOD
ya too wack to be with no crew, ya entire flows old
Wit such horrible lines, I never thought they'd go solo
AVERAGE..

8/10

v/cel ill poll this when i get enough posts


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163355

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163191

[Ethik]

Mc_Quicksand- Overall I would give your verse a 3 out of 10.....I wasn't feelin wat you were saying. Your verse had its ups and downs.....Didn't see any tight wordplay. Didn't see any personals. No multi's. Punches were weak. That is just how i saw it no hate.

Cel- Aight it was quite clear you won this. There were a couple punchlines that stuck out to me. The pointless one was a good punch. The line before it was a little odd....lol. I was feelin the line after that also. I think you should work on wordplay and using multi's. Anyways i would give your verse 5 out of 10 if i rated it.

Vote - Celestial

[Ike Ill.]

Oh yeah./. . . ..

V/ Cel

First of all.. his verse had much better structure and flow.. was real neat, real nice and flowed straight. 2nd.. he came witty. He had some good punches, and fresh concepts.. really loved his opener, was creative and witty, made me chuckle. Nice. Quick sands verse lacked punches, it wasnt really dissing celestial at all, just statements and self glorification shit, which doesnt win battles. Also his structure was just blah

so Cel wins this for comming witty and having dope punches

[Cels]

Thanks for the votes guys

[subsalias]

ok i can poll the vote... im mywords

[Derive]

Best Lines in Battle:

Let me toast... ballet is illy & i eat ham for lunch kids
& yea this line is pointless.. like all of Quick's punches
But fuck it, you're to cool for me, and now i see why
He was partying the WHOLE night.. 7 forums up in EI
ya too wack to be with no crew, ya entire flows old
Wit such horrible lines, I never thought they'd go solo

Those were some funny ass lines.

Anyways, MC's lines REALLY sucked. He had NOTHING special at ALL.

Celestial had some nifty punches. Some were humorous and pretty witty. Battle is one-sided.

V/ Celestial

[Cels]

w00t

*maybe the beef is ending*