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3-0 is a K.O
yeh whoever drops first.. no due date.. just get it in like today cause ill be getin it in soon.. werd.
D.R.C
Record
10lines
house rules
3-0 is a K.O
yeh whoever drops first.. no due date.. just get it in like today cause ill be getin it in soon.. werd.
yo jus fo da RECORD, i kick a versetile freestyle
dog check da method, but dont copy this my style
meanwhile when i asked u to battle i didnt know how to rap
its a wrap though, yes i am blatain
i crept into hell and stole all my lyrics from satain
im no nastradamous but your failure is certain
yo when im done wit u ur body b hurtin
dont be shy dog pull up da curtain
this is only a warning
my rhymes be like bees and my syllables swarm-in
you couldnd defeat me even if yo boy goined-in
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Rookie and dont give a fuck!
another newb, this mutha fuka jus got his first loss
thought wales n scotland were wack, but now britains in the coin toss
u came wit no punches, ull leave wit a diss full
n wit as many typos as that, u can tell this bitch neva did school
those 4 lines just beat u,, ur verse tumbled like a fat kid tripping
ur text is useless, just like sum1 lip synching, wit no music
man im done. i just sonned u wit my weakest verse
and remember bitch u cant go forward in reverse
haha weak verse i jus did but it should pull it off...
vote up..
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Record got this.........I don't think this is his best verse. I've seen better. But like you said, it was enough to beat this other dude. You had better flow/structure. Weak punches, but his were just stupid. Overall weak battle, but it was easy to find a winner. Both lacked personals, etc.
vote: record
word. ^ i shouldn't have to drop an explanation on this. DRC, you're lacking.. badly. your structure & flow needs mad work, along with your concepts & punches. Record, i know you can do better, but you didn't really need to try in order to win this battle. you just did what you had to, which basically meant putting together a verse that flowed well and had good structure. yeah, Record takes this for having an overall better verse and coming less wack.
V/ Record
Been a real one.
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easy battle
first dude wack no personals,,hardly understandable,typos spellin all that nothin
record-tru u killed him withya first couple came out runnin didnt slow up verse okay,,,dont even need to explain the mod read it..
v-record
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D.R.C...
yo jus fo da RECORD, i kick a versetile freestyle
dog check da method, but dont copy this my style
weak opener and u rhymed the same word
meanwhile when i asked u to battle i didnt know how to rap
its a wrap though, yes i am blatain
i crept into hell and stole all my lyrics from satain
this line wasnt a punch or self glory, im not sure wat it was
im no nastradamous but your failure is certain
yo when im done wit u ur body b hurtin
dont be shy dog pull up da curtain
weak
this is only a warning
my rhymes be like bees and my syllables swarm-in
you couldnd defeat me even if yo boy goined-in
weak finisher
You didnt cum hard at all in this verse, focus on dissin the opponent and u'll do better.
record...
another newb, this mutha fuka jus got his first loss
thought wales n scotland were wack, but now britains in the coin toss
not a bad opener
u came wit no punches, ull leave wit a diss full
n wit as many typos as that, u can tell this bitch neva did school
meh, pretty nice
those 4 lines just beat u,, ur verse tumbled like a fat kid tripping
ur text is useless, just like sum1 lip synching, wit no music
didnt rhyme wit ur first line
man im done. i just sonned u wit my weakest verse
and remember bitch u cant go forward in reverse
not the best finisher, but better than his
I rekon that record came better in this, his verse needs sum elevatin but he had better attemps at punches, and he also actually had sum punches in there. D.R.C i wasnt feelin ur shit at all, sum of ur lines were streched and sum were really short,elevate man.
V//record for havin better attemps at punches and for actually havin sum in there.pz.
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not the best battle by record, but its clear that he understands the concepts of battling. his structure was more solid, and his flow was more fluent. He also had more wit. Record takes this one easily....DRC, work on your structure and focus on making your rhyme scheme more complex.
V-Record.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
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