Flows for ne hoes.

[DaRealist]

Yo dis yo boy Mike and yo boy David we here bouta kick a freestyle for yall niggaz and hoez right bout now here it is. Anything goes.

Yo dis yo boy Mike and Dearborn is da city i was born,
Da city in michigan and us white boyz bouta do it again,
Wut you thinkin we dont give a fuck,
We be like crime mob knuck if you buck mutha fucka,
People call me sick cuz im da type of nigga dat will fuck ya mutha,
And if da bitch look ugly best believe i aint gonna botha,
Ima fuckin P.I.M.P. so wutchu no bout me,
Im bouta pass diss keyboard to my Homie G.

Yo they call me big D from the D.E.T da city of da M.I.C
Nigga maybe broke but when a girl suck dick she will choke,
And this aint no joke,
People look at ya and call ya busted and fuckin discusted,
thats even fo that soft ass nigga named justin,
Wit lyricz like this I'm a Genus,
When ya girl looks at this she will fall in love wit dis Penis,
I'm sick of niggaz actin like they clamin red and blue,
But I bet you wont be clamin shit after you see my crew and wut we bring through.

[CrazyCarl]

Mike: This didn't seem to have any substance. Even for a freestyle there was most filler. Work on rhyming and being able to put it into your freestyle.
David: The rhyming was better, but you need to work on your flow. Try to keep your lines closer sized length.
Just constructive criticism, keep writing.

[DaRealist]

If yall could kinda help me i need some pointer on how to make some flows. I dont need flows i jus need pointers how to make em. Im new to dis game.

[CrazyCarl]

You need to check out the help section, learn about structure and form. Flow is just how you present your rap. Good flow is having what you want to say, but putting it into easy to follow near equal lines. You can't make a flow, its not an object.

[DaRealist]

IIght good lookin

[noncentz]

pm on here i will help all you wish

[Kill.]

yo man work on your syllable count. each bar should have two lines with an equal amount of syllables okay.