proverbial intrigue

[sunshine]

as i walk the dark valleys in the midst of the night i find the book of proverbs king solomon has supplied....................................an king solomon said unto me// My son,walk not thou in the way with them;refrain thy foot from their path: for their feet run to evil, and make haste to shed blood// (me) But their blood is my blood and their walk is my walk//(him)surely in vain the net is spread in the sight of any bird.And they lay wait for their own blood;they lurk privily for their own lives//(me) but how do i know thy never has before//(him) so are the ways of everyone that is greedy of gain;which taketh away the life of the owners thereof// (me)but what about thy sister?// (him)Wisdom crieth without;she ultreth her voice in the streets:she crieth in the chief place of consourse,in the openings of the gates:in the city she ultereth her words saying,How long ,ye simple ones,will ye love simplicity?and the scorners delight in their, and fools hate knowledge// (me) i dont know i am nothin but a fallen angel lookin for my wings// i have done somethings that i regret// and i have seen somethings happened that i shoulnt have let// I live life like a costly bet//but please dont give out on thee yet//(god) i will never give out on thy son,you are my child and unto you i give you love, thy shall walketh the right path leadin in my way//





ight yall i juss wanted to try sumthin different tell me what u think

[Master Blaster]

um ok

do whatever you feel is comfortable for your style

if its preaching preach

diffently different though

whats next?

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[Painkillaz]

I liked it but couldn't really catch the rhyme scheme...So i guessed i liked the intro even tho it was sorta stolen and played....But then you started flowin kep your head up

[LACK OF LOGIC]

RHYME SCHEME AINT ANYTHING SHE MAY SPIT DIFFERENTLY THEN ALL OF US THE CONCEPT WAS PEACE THOUGH AND THAT ALONE WITH YOUR IMADRY DESERVES PROPS THIS WAS ATLEAST A 7 OUT OF 10 MINIMUM

[sunshine]

hey logic u know im a guy right?

[LACK OF LOGIC]

NAH DONT MATTER THOUGH BUT MY BUST DUNNY I HERD SOMEONE BEFORE REFER TO YOU AS A FEMALE SO INSTEAD OF GETTING PERSONAL TO ASK I JUST ASSUMED NEVER THE LESS YOU GOT SKILLZ THAT WILL BE SLEPT ON JUST CAUSE YOUR WRITTING SCHEME BUT IF YOU CAN SPIT A VERSE TO A RHYTHM TO THIS YOU GOT MAD SKILLZ
ITS WHAT YOU SAY IN A VERSE NOT WHAT STYLE YOU SAY IT IN THIS WAS HOT AND IM EMBARASSED NOW ....LOL
I LOOK LIKE A JACK ASS !!!!!!!!!

[LACK OF LOGIC]

YO I JUST CALLED ALL OF YOU OUT ON BITCH SLAPPED READ IT SO NOTHING GETS TWISTED AROUND PLEASE

[sunshine]

i dunno that shyt was a expriment it was more of a story type thing

[LACK OF LOGIC]

DID YOU PEEP MY CALL OUT

[sunshine]

im bout to

[LACK OF LOGIC]

hit me for a collab if you like

[sunshine]

i sent u a email rie me back

[LACK OF LOGIC]

i hit you up w/b