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Well, I figure I'm start gettin tha fuckin props I really deserve...
Checkin in....
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You gettin thrown round bitch, but ya not gettin dropped back/
Spittin ya uneven barz, text jus makes you look like you wack/
Heroin addict livin by trains an spittin shit off tha tracks/
Shine when ya 83 Aspire gets waxed on 13 inch hubs/
Bitch I'm beatin you harder than bass from mah 15 inch subz/
You a false ass thug, only historic cause you sportin 98 lugz/
'Lennon' a hand cause I'll 'beat-le', 'V-dubz" know ya style Bugz/
I dont battle here anymore but I spit this anywayz...
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Edited to drop 4 more wack ass bars to match him...
Like kids in south park you cuttin shit outta paper meche/
Coulnt get no play if you was a station-2 sold out first day/
Leavin you in dissaray, with your weakness lyrical display/
Fagz jumpin outta fryin panz gettin broke like eggz in fray/
Dont count those 4 if rep gets pissed...
Last edited by T-Square; July 12th, 2002 at 03:24 AM
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Yo broke stylez how could u smile in tha heat of danger//
This is like a car accident dizastor, You've been wrecked by a stranger//
I'll iron your lyrics, and button away your illness, and put u away like a hanger//
Dis cat couldn't breaze through tracks if he road a roller coaster//
U took it like a man, Tha reason you're a poser//
Broke couldn't put links down on a golf course//
Couldn't drop bombs wit bin laden even if he waz forced//
broke couldn't comeback wit good lines, if he wrote his shit through hot mail//"
why you duck--o wait i know--its cause you suck-matic//
im havin u "heated" like "general electric" ya "energy" dont "Fit"/
I'll leave u unnlimted feet unda tha ground in a bottomless pit//
both sides were pretty simple on the volcab and word play but the punches were pretty good i like
broke stylez line "'Lennon' a hand cause I'll 'beat-le', 'V-dubz" know ya style Bugz/" pretty original
he gets my vote cause of punches like this
win loss record 11-14 with 5 k.o's
nice batlle....... not that much to say....
but yo..... props for both of ya.....
ya both had hot nice quick flows.
this was pretty tie.......
but yo i was feeling broke styles more
vote = broken styles
That's Because It WASN'T A Good Battle . . .Originally posted by az-ace
nice batlle....... not that much to say....
Good Effort Though , Much Props For That , But One Thing That Ya'll Could've Improved On That Would've Made Your Verse Like 50% Better Was Wording , I Saw Some Nice Concepts In There , But They Were Just Worded Horribly . . . Keep Elevating . . . *<Turns Off TEACHER MODE>* . . . . .
VOTE ::: I Think The B.S. Won Just Because He Was Less Shitty
LMAO , J/K . . . I Think Mr. Stylez Won By A Hair !
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i thought histrywrecker had this after the first two bars,...but after that your rhyme scheme was just terrible ....so ima have to give this to BROKE STYLEZ b/c his verse was constructed better
HISTRYWRECKER::
Yo broke stylez how could u smile in tha heat of danger//
This is like a car accident dizastor, You've been wrecked by a stranger//
alright opener..not to hard..
I'll iron your lyrics, and button away your illness, and put u away like a hanger//
Dis cat couldn't breaze through tracks if he road a roller coaster//
filler shit here..not hard at all..
U took it like a man, Tha reason you're a poser//
Broke couldn't put links down on a golf course//
blah man..
Couldn't drop bombs wit bin laden even if he waz forced//
broke couldn't comeback wit good lines, if he wrote his shit through hot mail//"
not really feeling it..
why you duck--o wait i know--its cause you suck-matic//
im havin u "heated" like "general electric" ya "energy" dont "Fit"/
I'll leave u unnlimted feet unda tha ground in a bottomless pit//
NOT A GOOD ENDING MAN..YOU HAD LOTS OF FILLERS..AND FEW PUNCHES..
BROKE STYLEZ::
You gettin thrown round bitch, but ya not gettin dropped back/
Spittin ya uneven barz, text jus makes you look like you wack/
OK BEGINNING..NOT TOO HARD
Heroin addict livin by trains an spittin shit off tha tracks/
Shine when ya 83 Aspire gets waxed on 13 inch hubs/
FILLER....BLAH
Bitch I'm beatin you harder than bass from mah 15 inch subz/
You a false ass thug, only historic cause you sportin 98 lugz/
'Lennon' a hand cause I'll 'beat-le', 'V-dubz" know ya style Bugz/
LOL..NOT TOO HARD..BUT MAD ME LAUGH..
Like kids in south park you cuttin shit outta paper meche/
Coulnt get no play if you was a station-2 sold out first day/
Leavin you in dissaray, with your weakness lyrical display/
Fagz jumpin outta fryin panz gettin broke like eggz in fray/
OK SHIT HERE..NOT REALLY FEELING..IT..NOT TOO SURE IF YOU SPIT IT TO MAKE PEEPS FEEL IT..BUT NOT GOOD OF AN ENDING..BUT OK
BROKE STYLEZ GOT THIS..HE CAME WITH MORE OF AN ENTERTAING VERSE..MORE PUNCHES..THAN HISTRYS..
VOTE BROKE STYLEZ..
thi s was a alright battle alot of fillers on both parts but i think broke stylez last four lines took the battle for him only line i liked from histry was
Dis cat couldn't breaze through tracks if he road a roller coaster//
but my vote=broke stylez
I will not lose because even in defeat, there is a valuable lesson learned so it evens it up for me. -Sean Carter
Being defeated is only a temporary condition; giving up is what makes it permanent. -Marilyn vos Savant
This was a simple battle. Broke, I've seen way better from him. Histry, seen betta from him too. Histry was okay at the beginnin and then his rhyme scheme took a detour. Should've stayed on point and his attaccs were too simple. Same wit broke, except his punches hit harder.
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
thats all there is to say....
I posted absolute shit that rhymed, and it won
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
Wow, I'm lightweight now, hunh???
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BROKE STYLEZ- 4-2
HISTRYWRECKER- 3-1
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