User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: doesnt make tons of sense but worth a look

  1. December 23rd, 2004, 03:59 PM #1
    Hailstorm
    Guest

    worth a look

    metaphorically speaking
    my brains are hypothetically leaking
    and i dont anything worth thinking
    extremely slowly i am sinking
    on the ship of life and rightness
    i am starting to see the light and its brightness
    at the end the tunnel and I wonder who ignites it
    who is the one bravely leading the way
    but then turns around and starts speeding away
    so I have to find my own way to the end of my days
    and dig my own six foot deep grave
    but its not too bad cuz im noone elses slave
    i wont have to ever be their slave agin anyway
    any way with these dreams i have never fulfilled
    I am still going to be killed and will forever be still
    but after i am long gone
    i know that with someone my dreams will still live on.
    Last edited by Hailstorm; December 23rd, 2004 at 04:17 PM
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. December 23rd, 2004, 04:17 PM #2
    Hailstorm
    Guest
    comon ppl check this out
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. December 23rd, 2004, 05:37 PM #3
    Hailstorm
    Guest
    someone tell me what they think comeon
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. December 23rd, 2004, 06:05 PM #4
    YoungTuan
    Guest
    that shit was good...keep postin'
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. December 23rd, 2004, 06:18 PM #5
    VETERAN
    VETERAN is offline
    No VETERAN's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2004
    Location
    Earth
    Posts
    1,173
    the begining didn't work. You were trying to hard with the vocab. You should only use big words like that when there really needed. hen you started talking bout the light in the tunnel it got better. The topic became clearer. It's alright, just need to practice more. Not bad though
    “If I play the record a thousand times a day muthuf**kas will like it.” It’s like if you give a muthaf**ka nothing but bulls**t to eat, he’s gonna learn to enjoy it. Ya know I’ll throw a lil’ gravy on it-they gonna learn to enjoy the bulls**t. In the absence of the truth, bulls**t will prevail."-DMX
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. December 23rd, 2004, 06:31 PM #6
    Johnny 6-feet
    Johnny 6-feet is offline
    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2002
    Location
    England, Liverpool
    Posts
    5,123
    Battle Record
    8-1
    you're not a rookie, i can tell that right off. strong vocab for the most part and some pretty good multi's. the subject matter seemed to be introspective but i didn't catch any specific images from this piece. but you got the foundation for illness here, i wanna see more from you.

    keep posting, keep elavating. if you could rep one of mine back i'd apprciate it.

    SS League Record 31-8
    SS HW Champ
    14 x OM HoF


    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. December 23rd, 2004, 09:45 PM #7
    Mistral
    Mistral is offline
    Banned
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Mifflinburg, PA
    Posts
    6,693
    Battle Record
    12-1
    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  8. December 24th, 2004, 06:48 PM #8
    Hailstorm
    Guest
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post1933027
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post1933040
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  9. December 24th, 2004, 06:51 PM #9
    Hailstorm
    Guest
    people i need ppl to vote on my Hailstorm vs MC_Bronze battle
    plz noones voted yet and its been A day
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  10. December 24th, 2004, 07:31 PM #10
    F.A.M.
    F.A.M. is offline
    LiTeSknBaby F.A.M.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2004
    Location
    S.O.U.T.H.
    Posts
    915
    Battle Record
    11-8
    aight aight..thats was cool seem like some shit off top of the head,,keep droppin,,keep learnin...keep spittin,,much love one

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  11. December 25th, 2004, 04:27 PM #11
    Kill.
    Kill. is offline
    REAL
    Join Date
    Dec 2004
    Age
    34
    Posts
    755
    Battle Record
    11-5
    Good Style But Keep Workin On It. Good Shit Though
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Dollars Make Sense - Daz & Nah
    By Nahlidge in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 15
    Last Post: May 16th, 2007, 08:07 AM
  2. so the bible has this one story right....doesint make sense for...
    By RXL in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 33
    Last Post: February 7th, 2006, 12:57 PM
  3. Keystyled Verse - Really Don't Make Sense LoL
    By TeLLaKoNeSiS in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 28
    Last Post: February 3rd, 2005, 07:55 PM
  4. Peep, once again it don't make sense, im jus rhymn
    By Mrfatface in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: May 4th, 2002, 05:33 PM
  5. Shit don't make sense
    By Mrfatface in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: May 2nd, 2002, 09:07 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules