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good shit man
Damn...this piece amazed me...the emotion in both verses was crazy....the structure the flow and the vocab in this piece was just mind blowing...i like the concept of this piece a lot...in my opinion the second verse was better, but both verses complimented each other....nice shit holmes...one
vote this for legends !
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the pound is stronger than the dollar, HOLLA !
dam man that was dope nice job i like the secound line!
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next mother fucker to vote this in legends will get modship, by yours truely !
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the pound is stronger than the dollar, HOLLA !
shush...Originally Posted by Jekyll
Sublime D posted 20 hours ago, telling you he'd drop a reply in a minute, and he's not done so yet.
thanks.
ok...
im finally getting around to this reply...sorry for forgetting...
this was a very exceptional above average piece...the first verse had a very tight rhythm and meter and the quick pacing was a nice compliment to the second verse...i loved the metaphors, the diction was appropriate and the syntax was good...
the second verse was more poetic, more laid back in rhythm, and a longer meter, the metaphors and similies in this verse enamored me, well maybe enamored is too strong of a word, but i enjoyed them...especially the chess references that some may not have gotten and the card references...your diction was superb, even a word or two that i had to infer the meanings of...and the syntax you created was very effective and powerful...
this piece of writing was elevated in all ways...this is one of the best pieces ive read in open mic in a long time...
congratulations...
and demik we need to collab...
Last edited by Sublime D; December 31st, 2004 at 05:03 PM
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